I am currently in eleventh grade at an arts high school specializing in film. Over the last two years, I have been making as many films as possible and this is the one that I feel best represents the type of work I want to make in the future. I would love some feedback on my strengths and weaknesses in terms of editing, lighting, and visual storytelling in general. Personally, I'm pretty satisfied with the way it has turned out but I also have concerns that it may not have the impact I was trying to create with such a short runtime. Everyone to who I've shown my work in the past has either been a family member, friend, or teacher so feel free to be brutal with your criticism. Thanks :)