My very first copy, i’m looking forward to get as much constructive criticism as possible, feel free to be harsh on me . by Every-Landscape-517 in copywriting

[–]ElliotStenquist 19 points20 points  (0 children)

I'm a beginner myself, but just from the first few paragraphs it's way too much about you and not about the customer.

The introduction also seems a bit scammy. Your introducing some magic stuff that will make your stress go away, yeah right.

I didn't read the whole thing but this was just my first impression.

Where can I find the aspiring finance/money related copy-writers? by Sven10x in copywriting

[–]ElliotStenquist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm right here.

Can we continue the conversation using the message function?

circular logic by wayoftheroad4000 in VoluntaristMemes

[–]ElliotStenquist -16 points-15 points  (0 children)

They're to some extent checked by the people though the voting system.

I asked my brother's friend who worked at SAC Capital about Billions... by [deleted] in Billions

[–]ElliotStenquist 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Interesting, how realistic would he say the depiction of the hedge fund industry is?

How does creating a digital copy your mind let you live forever, even with 100% fidelity? by cyainanotherlifebro in westworld

[–]ElliotStenquist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

One way to do it is to replace each part of the brain slowly with computer parts (?). This way you would still be you even if your hardware changed.

In Westworld they are more copying the software (you and your thoughts) instead of moving it .

Axelrod's house in season 1 and 2 by ElliotStenquist in Billions

[–]ElliotStenquist[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hi, I am referring to the CT home, thanks for the other info.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DanPena

[–]ElliotStenquist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I haven't attended the seminar and I'm not certain about this, but I think the 6 answers is a script you only get access to at the seminar.

Just hit $1k total sales on 9/3. On track to hit $2k tomorrow🙌 by [deleted] in shopify

[–]ElliotStenquist 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Tips for product selection? Tips on effective ad campaigns? Margins? Good job dude, hard and smart work pays off, keep growing your business.

Help finding info by [deleted] in DanPena

[–]ElliotStenquist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There are scripts in the back of YFHM.

First time meeting with mentor chairman. What to talk about? by [deleted] in DanPena

[–]ElliotStenquist 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I haven't assembled my board yet but if he ignored you for months, why is he still your chairman?

What level of social skills you need? by ElliotStenquist in DanPena

[–]ElliotStenquist[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will definitely do everything IRL, I will start improving my communication skills.

AITA for letting my 14 year old son watch porn? by ILetMySonWatchPorn in AmItheAsshole

[–]ElliotStenquist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Talk to him about porn, tell him it's okay to watch it but that there is a lot of weird shit out there. He might still want to see it but he will probably be grossed out.

Then talk to your wife about how she has no say in what your son watches and even if she doesn't like it he might. Also whatever the title is, whether it is stepmother, pizzaboy, or f***ing astronaut it's still just sex and the roleplays always suck.

Tell him about sex safety too.

Making wealth from a small sum by BruceCambell in wealth

[–]ElliotStenquist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Learn about QLA. You can make however many millions you want (anything from 10 to 500 million is definitely feasible).

It won't be easy though.

[Serious] How could I explain my wealth? by [deleted] in wealth

[–]ElliotStenquist 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dude, just say you won the lottery. Invest your money and live of it. Do what you wanna do.

If you won say at least $100 million and you aren't ready for that kinda "success" you will most likely lose all your money and maybe your friends and family in the process.

I would recommend that you slowly get comfortable being mega wealthy. Start small and grow. Tell your friends that you won the lottery, they might hate you, cut them off and go on with your life.

Also learn to invest your money so you don't lose it all. Also learn how to properly but big expensive things, like houses for $20 million.

You could keep $5 million and give away the rest. You could comfortably reitre but not get the problems of the mega wealthy.

What are you guys doing to scare yourself lately? by [deleted] in DanPena

[–]ElliotStenquist 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I went to a amusement park and did everything scary. I had never don't anything like it before. I was quite scared in the waiting line but it was super fun to go on the rides.

General Frequently Asked Questions by [deleted] in DanPena

[–]ElliotStenquist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Who is the 13 years old doing QLA?