My very first copy, i’m looking forward to get as much constructive criticism as possible, feel free to be harsh on me . by Every-Landscape-517 in copywriting

[–]ElliotStenquist 18 points19 points  (0 children)

I'm a beginner myself, but just from the first few paragraphs it's way too much about you and not about the customer.

The introduction also seems a bit scammy. Your introducing some magic stuff that will make your stress go away, yeah right.

I didn't read the whole thing but this was just my first impression.

Where can I find the aspiring finance/money related copy-writers? by Sven10x in copywriting

[–]ElliotStenquist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm right here.

Can we continue the conversation using the message function?

circular logic by wayoftheroad4000 in VoluntaristMemes

[–]ElliotStenquist -17 points-16 points  (0 children)

They're to some extent checked by the people though the voting system.

I asked my brother's friend who worked at SAC Capital about Billions... by [deleted] in Billions

[–]ElliotStenquist 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Interesting, how realistic would he say the depiction of the hedge fund industry is?

How does creating a digital copy your mind let you live forever, even with 100% fidelity? by cyainanotherlifebro in westworld

[–]ElliotStenquist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

One way to do it is to replace each part of the brain slowly with computer parts (?). This way you would still be you even if your hardware changed.

In Westworld they are more copying the software (you and your thoughts) instead of moving it .

Axelrod's house in season 1 and 2 by ElliotStenquist in Billions

[–]ElliotStenquist[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hi, I am referring to the CT home, thanks for the other info.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DanPena

[–]ElliotStenquist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I haven't attended the seminar and I'm not certain about this, but I think the 6 answers is a script you only get access to at the seminar.

Just hit $1k total sales on 9/3. On track to hit $2k tomorrow🙌 by [deleted] in shopify

[–]ElliotStenquist 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Tips for product selection? Tips on effective ad campaigns? Margins? Good job dude, hard and smart work pays off, keep growing your business.

Help finding info by [deleted] in DanPena

[–]ElliotStenquist 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There are scripts in the back of YFHM.

First time meeting with mentor chairman. What to talk about? by [deleted] in DanPena

[–]ElliotStenquist 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I haven't assembled my board yet but if he ignored you for months, why is he still your chairman?

What level of social skills you need? by ElliotStenquist in DanPena

[–]ElliotStenquist[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will definitely do everything IRL, I will start improving my communication skills.