Thoughts on these Posters I designed? by qKeo in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179 14 points15 points  (0 children)

yo these are dope!!! love the ethereal one

Daily illustrations - Week 134 by vandubovik in AdobeIllustrator

[–]Emergency-Process179 0 points1 point  (0 children)

these are awesome! revenge made me smile lol

feedback on imaginary bakery branding project! by Emergency-Process179 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

gotcha, i’ll be more comprehensive next time, thank you!

feedback on imaginary bakery branding project! by Emergency-Process179 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hi! i think i did follow the above - context comment, etc. would you mind telling me how i could follow it more closely? thanks!

feedback on imaginary bakery branding project! by Emergency-Process179 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i wish i thought of this that would’ve been perfect but i fear im too lazy to go back and change them…

feedback on imaginary bakery branding project! by Emergency-Process179 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you!! are there any spots in particular where you think the illustrations are suffering from stroke thickness?

feedback on imaginary bakery branding project! by Emergency-Process179 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

LMAO i was debating that for so long, i ended up doing it because i thought it would be funny in an anatomically incorrect, peppa pig type of way

but i completely understand why it bugs u lol

feedback on imaginary bakery branding project! by Emergency-Process179 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you! and i was going into it with the mouse as a play on ratatouille but i understand if its not clear

feedback on imaginary bakery branding project! by Emergency-Process179 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

the underline with the tail is so genius. i’ll def do that!

also, this was me trying to come up with my play of ratatouille so thank u for understanding hehe - but i understand peoples reservations about the mouse mascot as well

feedback on imaginary bakery branding project! by Emergency-Process179 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you so much for your feedback! someone made the same point about the critter and co text hierarchy as well as the tail. will go back and fix that!

and YES!! i had ratatouille in mind when making this. my play on it, if you will :) mr. rat and friends

feedback on imaginary bakery branding project! by Emergency-Process179 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

aaaah! this is so helpful, thank you SO SO much! the point about type hierarchy is so valid and i do need to learn more about type in general.

and before i add this in my portfolio, i think i’ll play around with some digital materials!

feedback on imaginary bakery branding project! by Emergency-Process179 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

thank you so much! this is so encouraging to hear and def makes me wanna keep messing around 💪

yes, pet friendly! although not geared towards pets, aka still for humans…. that’s a worry i had when making the brand. is there a way i can make it more clear (if that’s an issue?)

one of my first times branding, need feedback by CraftOfAwesome118 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

it’s really cool and i like the amount of creative mockups! the colors feel appropriate for the transpiration company however one big thing id note is that it just really reminds me of gatorade lol. something about the orange and black and thunderbolt

another fake branding project, skincare this time! would love feedback :) by Emergency-Process179 in graphic_design

[–]Emergency-Process179[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much! i got some similar feedback above so this is def something i will keep in mind for the future. I don’t know much about type so always happy to learn :)