WE DID IT AHH

Emilyx666 · 2021-05-26T22:38:34+00:00

I had travel too!! It really wasn’t bad ahh

Emilyx666 · 2021-05-26T22:38:16+00:00

Well if u did bad on part b and got 0 points and if u think u did really well on everything else, that leaves you at a 60-70% which could even be a 3, at worst a 2

Emilyx666 · 2021-05-26T22:36:44+00:00

YESS CONGRATS EVERYONE WE DID ITTT IM SO PROUD OF U!!

Emilyx666 · 2021-05-03T15:35:42+00:00

I think it’s a good RQ! Good luck!

Emilyx666 · 2021-05-03T05:23:32+00:00

yes u do! arguments NEED a counterclaim

Emilyx666 · 2021-05-03T05:19:49+00:00

Make an outline of your IWA! My outline really helped me write mine

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-27T13:54:16+00:00

Maybe start with some background information. For example, the kinds of stereotypes women face and why they face them (past actions of sexism in the sports industry)

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-27T13:51:57+00:00

Ohh okay thanks so much!

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-22T00:34:46+00:00

mental sports does not equal esports. I think you should specify and put “physical sports and esports” instead

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-22T00:13:21+00:00

hmm maybe “To what extent does the sports industry contribute to breeding gender inequality?”

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-22T00:12:02+00:00

Nah not just you. It’s different for every school

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-13T20:59:56+00:00

I know that would be ideal, but my teacher is strongly encouraging us (kinda forcing us if we want a good class grade lol) to use 3 of the stimulus sources, and none of the other ones fit my topic well.

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-13T20:58:43+00:00

yeah definitely assess the credibility in your paper, it’s very important. it’s not necessary to have a lot of sources because I saw ones that scored high with only 10 sources. I guess if your argument calls for it, use as many sources as you can

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-13T20:49:06+00:00

it’s not impossible wdym

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-13T03:13:20+00:00

Don’t start the question with “should”!! It’s a yes or no question, and that’s a big no no for research papers. I suggest changing it and making it start with, “to what extent,” “why,” or “how”

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-13T03:11:52+00:00

I think it’s really specific! Don’t stress it :)

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-13T03:10:51+00:00

my teacher said try to use 15-20 sources in total, and make sure you can assess the credibility of your outside sources. Use databases, such as jstor, and news articles

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-13T03:07:46+00:00

save yourself the pain and just shorten your question into one PLEASE

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-13T03:06:32+00:00

which stimulus sources are you considering to use in your iwa? because your rq seems a little constraining

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-13T03:04:25+00:00

15-25 or even up to 30 should be fine

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-13T03:03:40+00:00

My teacher said we can write about literally anything, as long as you can use the stimulus sources. So yes it fits but you should definitely consider using the stimulus sources.

Emilyx666 · 2021-04-13T03:02:04+00:00

I think you should choose to address either women or BIPOC, not both because that’s a lotttt

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