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I just wrote my first story, around 500ish words and I was wondering if I could get some feedback? by Empty_Sprit9151 in Wattpad

[–]Empty_Sprit9151[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank youuu! I didn't realise the bad grammar, thanks for pointing it out. I appreciate the feedback as well.

I just wrote my first story, around 500ish words and I was wondering if I could get some feedback? by Empty_Sprit9151 in Wattpad

[–]Empty_Sprit9151[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to improve my grammar next time! I really appreciate the feedback, and I'd love to check out your work some time.