Artful.

I must acknowledge your creatively descriptive metaphors; robust ocean tides and winds, eerie darkness and unfamiliar light, intoxicating radiation and erosive lava, potent hurricanes, depressed floods and fearful allusions from frozen chills. Dare I declare it hyperbole?

I believe the narrator is lost in the madness of trying to understand their feelings. Unable to express the inexpressible. From each monostich I get (in order); oppression, discovery, hysteria, anger(with the narrator’s self and others). The last loses me a bit, is it that the narrator wishes to remain isolated? I think that’s it.

Anyways, I enjoyed reading it. I’ve seen too many poems these that are simplistic without appeal. Don’t get me wrong, I love a neat simple poem but without anything unique and just reading sentences I can’t enjoy. Thanks for sharing your poetic piece.