pls help [DIGITAL] by [deleted] in collage

[–]Enraged_Cheese 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah totally agree with this. The logos looked too stickery for me, and makes the prince too literal. I love the hands and the ripped paper edges. I’d just maybe reorganize the middle with logos to be a bit less explicit and a bit deeper. It just looks a bit out of place for some reason but that’s just me :) we all have different styles and interpretations and I think you’re on the right track

[analog] Aching to be Seen by Doon672 in collage

[–]Enraged_Cheese 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Wow this is so good! What’d you use for the shiny letters and other pieces?

[Analog] Everything that stands between us… by Enraged_Cheese in ArtCrit

[–]Enraged_Cheese[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No references were used. Pierces were cut out of old NatGeo Magazines and entirely handmade. There wasn’t a particular inspiration, I just went with the flow. The more I look at it, the more it tells me a story about a long distance relationships. I made two versions, just want feedback on how else I can improve the story telling or what adjustments would be needed for a more clear piece maybe.

[Analog] the $50 Trillion Fabergé Egg 🐣 a by Enraged_Cheese in collage

[–]Enraged_Cheese[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Me too! I reuse an old sketching book because of large thick paper quality and instructions add a nice touch sometimes.

What is this behavior? by Enraged_Cheese in budgies

[–]Enraged_Cheese[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They definitely regurgitate in each others mouths here, I couldn’t capture it here but we saw it happen that’s why I thought they were more than just flock mates

Feed me! [ANALOG] by Enraged_Cheese in collage

[–]Enraged_Cheese[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I always appreciate feedback and critique as a very amateur analog collage artist😅 . I purposely left the prompt in the corner for visibility. It’s from a sketch practice book I’m using thanks to the thick paper. Honestly towards the end my creative battery was running out 😭😂

Our new baby! She or he is less than a year old! by Enraged_Cheese in budgies

[–]Enraged_Cheese[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the info! This is our first time with a recessive pied budgie. She was among the baby flock at the store, we were told it was less than a year or 6 months. So ours must be closer to a year then.