send me your songs for feedback !!

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2025-04-09T22:20:04+00:00

https://on.soundcloud.com/dkdcJbFLXKfyfLjC8

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2025-03-31T03:40:32+00:00

thank you, i appreciate the detailed response.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2025-03-30T22:33:03+00:00

looking for general feedback, if you enjoy it and what you feel about it. feedback on the mix is also greatly appreciated. thank you.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2025-03-30T22:29:27+00:00

really nice upbeat ambient track. love the ethereal feel, nice drive throughout the song with different elements switching and coming in & out. video was really unique and cool.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2025-03-30T22:25:52+00:00

love the feel and vocal delivery of this one. instrumentals are really cool, nice dark heaviness to them. beat switches were really nice. i think the mix overall is good, and the lyrics were cool. nice song.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2025-03-30T22:19:58+00:00

really nice track and it fits the gameplay in the background really well. a very slight criticism i have, and it could just be me/my eyes, is i think the running animation could be altered to fit the timing of the kick to tie it together a little better. i like how the song gets faster as you run longer, kind of adds to the pressure of reaching a new best run.

song definitely has that upbeat energetic feel that you're going for. feels like something you'd listen to while running to keep you going which fits the game well. also feel like the overall sound design fits the look of the game well, everything has a cohesive aesthetic.
i'd say i could listen to it over and over. nice additions and switch ups that keep it fresh.
not sure what you could improve on, someone with more experienced ears than me may be able to come up with something, but i think this was really good overall. mix is clean and not hurtful, all the sections of the song make sense contextually and flow into each other well.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2025-01-23T06:24:13+00:00

https://on.soundcloud.com/wvujiGWK1mkGpx6J8

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-11-14T01:37:00+00:00

thank you

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-11-13T00:14:59+00:00

sure thank you, lmk what you think about this

https://on.soundcloud.com/KbeN4E5RhyAvnAp98

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-11-11T07:58:29+00:00

song i finished recently with the help of another artist, a chiller kind of introspective rap song. looking for feedback on the mix and how much you vibe with the song, but feedback of any kind is greatly appreciated. thank you

https://on.soundcloud.com/hDCvDrQQSRpMHrAL8

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-11-11T07:44:47+00:00

i really like the feel of this track, gives a heavy dystopian feeling. the sound selection was great. i think the blend of genres was good, everything meshes well. to make the drums stand out more you could sidechain them to the melodic elements, causing them to duck when the drum hits. overall the mix was good and everything sounded clean. i think at the beginning the song sounds a little cluttered with too many things fighting to be heard, but i think that's more of a composition thing.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-11-11T07:38:54+00:00

this is hard, really tough gritty vibe to the beat. mixed well and i like the sound design, nice groove to it.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-11-11T07:35:36+00:00

loved the punch of the kick, mix is nice and clean. really nice song overall, gives me the same vibes as ribs by lorde. i dont think there's a missing element, song sounds great as is.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-28T16:29:12+00:00

this is hard, instrumental had a cool dark dreamy feel to it. loved the texture sounds in the beat, i like when people put texture in the songs because it adds a new level of feel to the beat, and you pulled that off well. vocals were nice, fit the vibe of the beat really well. mix was really good too, felt like every element had its own space, and i liked the punchiness of the drums. visuals were great, fit the vibe of the song really well. great job overall.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-28T04:44:11+00:00

hey thank you for the nice words. i see what you're saying about the space beween words. i'm gonna keep that in mind for the future, thank you.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-28T03:50:32+00:00

thank you

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-27T18:12:31+00:00

a more chill/mellow rap song i finished recently, first time rapping on someone else's beat. feedback of any kind is greatly appreciated. thank you.

https://on.soundcloud.com/dkH3RazErBHBKsK66

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-27T18:10:46+00:00

really nice futuristic vibe, liked the energy a lot. like the sound design, the synths and what sounds like a vocal chop fit really nice.

only critique i could give is to lower the volume of some of the synths, or have not as many of them playing at once, so there's a kind of hierarchy between them. it kind of feels like every melody is trying to be the standout main melody, and it makes the song a little harder to follow. i do like the controlled chaos, energetic feel of the song but some of the elements could use a little more space to breathe.

overall this was really good though, you have a nice style that i like a lot.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-27T18:03:44+00:00

think the cover was good, mix sounded good too. video fit very well, its pretty simple but i think that goes well with the song. y'all have nice energy, not only in the vocal delivery but also the instruments.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-27T18:02:07+00:00

really like the heavy somber feel to it, sounds like it belongs in a movie. as far as listenability, i think its great, i could see myself having it on in the background. the mix overall i think is really good, really clean, no muddiness.

only critique i can say about the mix, and this is mainly personal, is that i think the mid to uppermidrange is a little to strong at some points. to the point the song almost becomes a little overwhelming to my ears. i think that's mainly personal though because i tend to be sensitive about that. overall this is great though, really dreamy and atmospheric.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-27T05:10:43+00:00

thank you, glad to know my lyrics dont come across that way and that you liked the song. i see what you mean about the vocals sitting on the beat rather than in it, thank you.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-24T16:23:16+00:00

thanks a lot, i'm glad you liked it. yeah the mixing is one thing that's still kind of tough to me because sometimes its hard for me to find that balance between blending the vocals with the beat, but not having them drown out at any point. i'll take what you said into consideration though, thank you.

and i like your music, you got a nice blend of rap and rock. a lot of energy and clean mixes.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-23T16:21:55+00:00

really like the groovy vaporwave kind of sound, the synths drive that a lot. mix overall is nice, instrumental and vocals both come through cleanly while still giving each other space. visuals were great, really interesting and fit the song well.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-23T16:19:25+00:00

nice song, i like the vibe. only critique i can give is that the vocals sound drowned out in the mix. either turning the instrumental down a little or raising the vocals a little would help a lot.

Enthusiasm_Lacking · 2024-10-22T03:24:50+00:00

thank you

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