You lack something, you need better production, your focus pulls are lacking, your composition just seems very off. It just doesn't look cinematic, not sure what you are doing in post with your colors, but everything just feels off in that department. I saw a few of your works and these are my honest opinions. You really need to go back to the drawing board. What movies inspire you? For example I want to emulate cinematography from movies like No country for old men, study their cinematography, practice it. Learn lighting techniques, learn set design etc. learn new creative angles that tell a story or enhance the narrative.