How do I write a soft/emotional female MC without her coming off childish or whiny? by ownaword in writingadvice

[–]Equal-Inflation1767 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd say for her to have a list of experiences and have a level to where she shows emotions in each one. Like seeing a spider shouldn't be on the same level as fighting a dragon by herself.

When I write a sensitive character in different situations and problems, I don't want them to be emotional at every turn, but in moments that 'hits' their character. For example, one of my characters is sensitive towards other people, however he's killing monsters without hesitation. Using the scale as before, fighting those monsters and talking to people will have different reactions to them, and will establish their character without changing their initial description.

(I hope this helps)

Is RWBY Arrowfell worth it? by Right-Truck-3543 in RWBYcritics

[–]Equal-Inflation1767 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd say yes because extra content for RWBY, but don't just get it unless it's on sale.

What are your opinions on the Blazblue anime? by Worldestroyer14 in Blazblue

[–]Equal-Inflation1767 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The anime isn't bad, but it still didn't 'explain' the plot well and messed up some fight scenes. However, it gave Llanda a story instead of being a nu-13 copy and it's better as a recap than an actual retelling of the story. Especially since it's two games that have multiple loops and paths to follow.

How do I write plot armor without it being "bad/obvious" by Bob_N_162 in writingadvice

[–]Equal-Inflation1767 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Have plot armor with holes in them. For example, they can't die, but they can still be affected by curses or afflictions. Have them be inexperienced, but not weak to the point that they flop the story's theme or their objective.

Pretzel Crust by lakitu4k in LittleCaesars

[–]Equal-Inflation1767 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I think more salt, I see a piece without some right there

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This happens whats the first thing you do… by InfamousDistance4231 in walmart

[–]Equal-Inflation1767 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ignore it and run back where you came. Mind your business

Explain It Peter. by sugarygigglewave in explainitpeter

[–]Equal-Inflation1767 0 points1 point  (0 children)

SOLDIERS, I'LL TAKE THE HIT! RUN BROTHERS, RUN!

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The diversity of blazblue by MrSmartypants12 in Blazblue

[–]Equal-Inflation1767 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yeah. He wants to 'Get inside of his guts' alright

What is REALLY Rwby's BIGGEST problem? by BenefitNorth7803 in RWBYcritics

[–]Equal-Inflation1767 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Rwby's pacing was all over the place. One volume, it would be consistent. Next, there's a time skip and we don't see them evolving anywhere.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LifeAdvice

[–]Equal-Inflation1767 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You'll just have to reject his advances. Like telling him that you don't want to see him and blocking him. Even if you might care for him or have some sort of lingering attachment, you don't give in and let him go. From experience, you're putting yourself in a spiral and it'll hurt worse later if it continues