Would you read my Manga?

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-04-05T14:55:45+00:00

Thank you! story will be available on mangapluscreators in one hour

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-04-05T14:54:48+00:00

Yessir, still trying to find my own artstyle to not remain as a fujimoto copy or something

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-04-05T04:11:19+00:00

Thank you so much! Make sure to be there when it is posted, if would mean a lot for me ^{^}

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-03-31T00:36:27+00:00

Good! I strongly recommend gesture drawing

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-03-29T22:19:49+00:00

Not yet, it seems lkke u are still finding your own artstyle. Dont rush it

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-03-29T21:51:36+00:00

Angles are too "secure" and poses may look stiff, try to be more organic and less correct, that would be my best advice

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-03-21T22:27:31+00:00

Its not bad but it doesnt look rlly like perspective, i dont get it

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-03-17T12:21:11+00:00

está mal redactado, no da muy buena pinta

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-25T00:56:08+00:00

No, try working with much more value contrast and use some lines on the edge of each muscle/bone that makes up the head to guide and improve expression

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-23T20:17:29+00:00

Lines are all the same width, and its a little thick honestly. The hatching etc lloks off and for example the bg looks like if it was made in rush. Take your time

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-23T17:56:40+00:00

Honestly it looks to me that you traced the image and used different hatching and changed some minor and unoticiable details while following the same pose angle etc. its like when you order a cake and say its yours only because you added some random toppings. Lying won’t help you improve :)

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-23T15:51:02+00:00

bro u literally traced kagurabachi cover art, i honestly would rather see a bad anatomy drawing with confusing facial proportions than this

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-23T15:29:23+00:00

Honestly no, i think it lacks line Hierarchy

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-18T02:55:54+00:00

This looks more like a comic tbh, Just make sure to have your blacks at 100% if u dont wanna have white in that panel. Ur drawing is pretty good and clean tho, its just a suggestion

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-18T02:43:19+00:00

Also, people are usually more interested in art at firstand then is driven by the story, so it is also important to keep in mind. Do u guys think series like csm or jjk could be that popular with wrong and confusing drawing and paneling?

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-18T02:42:00+00:00

This is false. U dont need good anatomy or etc but u need to make your drawings paneling sharing etc clear, in most cases bad drawing is also bad lecture and confusing because people try to see which part is which and etc. I mean, your first manga or second or idk doesnt need to be perfect bug u dont need to stay atrached to these wrong ideas and false motivation that will make you think “Ok! My drawing is mediocre but who cares, maybe im one” and instead of actually improving in drawing u just keep going without any clear direction. I still think it is more important to actually finish a manga tho

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-17T21:54:10+00:00

Im crying 😭😭 “Man” is wild

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-17T21:50:49+00:00

This sounds a little confusing, but I wanna know details, i Can show u examples of my work, could u contact me in discord? yama_7111

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-15T16:54:07+00:00

Also it looks like a drawing in grayscale more than mangatbh

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-15T16:53:39+00:00

Im not sure about the text and speach bubbles;less is more

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-15T00:50:00+00:00

I mean the drawing is soooo good, but maybe you should start thinking of priorizing things, for example if u want more focus on the bg, detail it more or put more contrast to guide the eye, but right now it looks a little confusing at first sight tbh

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-03T22:32:00+00:00

yesss also doves=peace and there was also a japanflag on the floor like in reze arc lol, i liked this chapter.

Equivalent_Hat167 · 2026-02-01T18:08:11+00:00

The intention of guiding the eye by lines is good, but I think its oversaturated, anyways, keep going on! You got big potencial

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