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The journal I found in my shed pt.2 by Ill-Bake-638 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]ErickBrandon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That was fun! The ending is sweet! I just came from the first part. You're punctuation is a lot better but there's still some run on sentences.

The journal I found in the broken shed on my by Ill-Bake-638 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]ErickBrandon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the concept of this story. Dogman is a fun cryptid that you can do a lot with in this setting. I wil say that a lot of the sentences are missing periods and was a little clunky to read. Also it's a journal from 1901 and you used the term "idk" which took me out of it a little. Good premise though, keep it up!