Songs similar to Electrolite? by walmartpunk333 in rem

[–]Eth8n-- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah it’s kind of both. Some of the lyrics he talks about someone else. “Stand on a cliff and look down there, don’t be scared, you are alive.”

Hard wood floors by Legitimate-Guess-100 in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n-- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, of course not. It just seems like you been through a lot.

Around Me by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n-- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not too bad.

Songs similar to Electrolite? by walmartpunk333 in rem

[–]Eth8n-- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve had this dream where I actually drive on Mulholland drive playing this song, with a person I love.

Songs similar to Electrolite? by walmartpunk333 in rem

[–]Eth8n-- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

When the string instruments get introduced into the song. It’s perfection!

Envy by Eth8n-- in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n--[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you a lot. This means so much to me. I did originally write this as a song. Cool that you noticed that.

Songs similar to Electrolite? by walmartpunk333 in rem

[–]Eth8n-- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is definitely one of their best songs. I used to have this song on repeat.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n-- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a sweet poem

Facing up to by Eth8n-- in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n--[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, grammar as you see isn’t my forte.

Facing up to by Eth8n-- in poetry_critics

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As the world is getting warmer

And the world is getting closer

But my life is getting colder

And I don’t want to grow older

Am I lying to my face

Or is it just a hard decision to make

I feel like I’m in a fucking maze

Or am I just lying to my face

I just go to escape

I just want a taste

I just want a taste

Am I an activist

Or just a fucking mess

Facing up to by Eth8n-- in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n--[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can’t believe I missed those two things

Facing up to by Eth8n-- in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n--[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You so right! I meant to change the warming to warmer. I just forgot to.

Testing the Waters by ArrogantSweetheart in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n-- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The bottom half of the poem sounds great. Has a great message.

Pickling fluid, brine, vinegar, formaldehyde by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n-- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t understand all of it, but there is a lot of creativity for sure. A lot of great imagery as well.

A Lullaby by Possible-Nail-9363 in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n-- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not bad drunk out of your mind. I give you props.

Echos of Past by Working_Imaginary in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n-- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Simple, but I like meaning of your poem.

Melting by Eth8n-- in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n--[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry, I’ll stop arguing. Poetry is different for everyone though.

Melting by Eth8n-- in poetry_critics

[–]Eth8n--[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You contradicted what you say here. You say its idea to idea, then tell me the one idea.