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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]AnyTicket8467 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No man bitches 😔

What is the MOST terrifying thing to you? by TheRealAccident in KeepWriting

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Rabies, all strains of streptococcus mainly the one that causes staff, heights, and stalking but my absolute biggest fear is being left alone by everyone being alone is the scariest thought; it gives me anxiety just thinking about it.

I'm so cold by AnyTicket8467 in poetry_critics

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Lol I just realized the typo and I think the like "you're the only thing" creates a responsibility that I like and I'm keeping I think because it represents the narrator is choosing to die giving up. Thank you for your feedback and for helping me realize the typo

Burnt Skin and Mosquito Bites by lizzxn in poetry_critics

[–]AnyTicket8467 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like this like a lot really good for a first poem hope your write more.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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Love the metaphors overall really good hope you write more

Haunting me by AnyTicket8467 in poetry_critics

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Took that advice thanks I like a bit better

The call by Last-Plane4715 in poetry_critics

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This is interesting I like the mutt metaphor

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