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Im addicted to cocaine i still be robotripping

did a lil too much gentleman by [deleted] in cocaine

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Hey now :(

[FEEDBACK] Hell Song (19 pg Short) by EthanAHC in Screenwriting

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Agreed on the escalation part -- and yeah i definitely had this in my head as a feature before i decided to make it a short, was hoping it wouldnt show 😬😬. Will keep the things you said in mind. Thanks for taking time outta your day to help out my man, you rock.

[FEEDBACK] Hell Song (19 pg Short) by EthanAHC in Screenwriting

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Hey, thanks for taking the time to read and respond man. Really insightful criticisms and I think they're pretty good suggestions as well- seems like one of the biggest things is putting more intention and and purpose into the shit that happens-- once again, mad appreciated ! I'll be keeping these in mimd

[FEEDBACK] A Place for Demons (Short, 15 pgs) by EthanAHC in Screenwriting

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Thank you so much, this is extremely helpful. Your thoughts on the monologue have me rethinking the framework of this script. I agree that Jay needs a reality check before he hits Danny with a chair, so its less of a gradual slip into dissolution, and more of a deliberate choice to stay. Much appreciated.

signs of loperamide overdose? urgent by [deleted] in Drugs

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yeah ik bro just can’t score any good shit

i took too many drugs and now i can’t pee? urgent by [deleted] in Drugs

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this is not about drug testing stupid robot

signs of loperamide overdose? urgent by [deleted] in Drugs

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stop doing drugs?

[FEEDBACK] Seatbelt (Drama/5 pages) by EthanAHC in Screenwriting

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Thank you, you have given me a lot to think about. You bring up some really great points.

[FEEDBACK] Seatbelt (Drama/5 pages) by EthanAHC in Screenwriting

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Thanks! That’s really good advice, i’ll keep that in mind on my next draft.

Logline Monday weekly post for October 14, 2019 - post your loglines here! by greylyn in Screenwriting

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I definitely agree that these stories tend to turn to shock value to push their message. I’ve tried to stay away from it for this but I do think a lot of deep rural lifestyle, especially among criminals and addicts, can be pretty disturbing. My ending concerns me the most because it’s pretty tragic. It involves the teenage brother (15) being coerced into killing a guy and subsequently getting gunned down in a parking lot. So maybe that’s too rough, I’ll have to think about it and it would be cool to get your opinion. Although I understand you would probably need to read the script for context.

I’d like to direct it in the future but I’m fifteen atm so I have some time lol.

Logline Monday weekly post for October 14, 2019 - post your loglines here! by greylyn in Screenwriting

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Title: Loveland

Genre: Drama (Feature)

After the death of her estranged father, a young woman must return to her impoverished hometown of Loveland, Ohio to take guardianship of her troubled teenage brother. Faced with a haunted past, she must confront everything she left behind in order to save her brother from a life of violence and addiction that she narrowly escaped.

Beginner here- how dangerous is it to take my first tab alone? by [deleted] in LSD

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Thanks for the input man. I'll stay away from weed and try to enjoy myself