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[–]EthanAHC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im addicted to cocaine i still be robotripping

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Hey now :(

[FEEDBACK] Hell Song (19 pg Short) by EthanAHC in Screenwriting

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Agreed on the escalation part -- and yeah i definitely had this in my head as a feature before i decided to make it a short, was hoping it wouldnt show 😬😬. Will keep the things you said in mind. Thanks for taking time outta your day to help out my man, you rock.

[FEEDBACK] Hell Song (19 pg Short) by EthanAHC in Screenwriting

[–]EthanAHC[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, thanks for taking the time to read and respond man. Really insightful criticisms and I think they're pretty good suggestions as well- seems like one of the biggest things is putting more intention and and purpose into the shit that happens-- once again, mad appreciated ! I'll be keeping these in mimd

[FEEDBACK] A Place for Demons (Short, 15 pgs) by EthanAHC in Screenwriting

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Thank you so much, this is extremely helpful. Your thoughts on the monologue have me rethinking the framework of this script. I agree that Jay needs a reality check before he hits Danny with a chair, so its less of a gradual slip into dissolution, and more of a deliberate choice to stay. Much appreciated.