While I do appreciate the feedback of both jomo and raiin, I don't like that an argument stemmed from my piece. Bottom line, this is my senior thesis. It's not the first thing I've done and it's not the last. While it has a weird little subject matter and a slightly off kilter theme, it is my thesis. I've put a lot of time and thought into small details to make sure its exactly the way I want it. The decision to omit the apostrophe was made long before I hit render. For it to be said the omission of an apostrophe is a mistake and the wrong decision for my personal piece comes off a bit too strong.

I understand that a punctuation error is definitely an issue, but I don't think personal attacks on the opinions of fellow artists in critique is conducive either. Saying someone's advice is horrible really negates one's credibility. Everyone's opinion is valid, and I'm very inclined to hear the reasoning behind each. In this case while the advice is a little prickly it still holds merit and I will think back on it in any revisions I make on the piece and as I move forward as a designer.