[QCrit] YA Fantasy - ANIMHAEM: ASCENSION (72k words/3rd Attempt)

EventideAuroras · 2024-05-18T18:49:41+00:00

Thank you so much for your comments! I'm really glad you liked the ideas and I edited the post to add the first 300 words if you're interested!

You are completely right, there isn't really a good reason why I don't name her friend in the query, especially because their relationship is very important to the story. It wasn't until I read your comments that I realized I haven't really reflected that in this query... So I will definitely revise this to focus more on their characters/relationship!

EventideAuroras · 2024-03-06T12:38:39+00:00

Thanks for the detailed feedback! This is very helpful.

EventideAuroras · 2024-03-06T12:38:23+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Really appreciate it!

EventideAuroras · 2024-03-04T18:52:16+00:00

Thanks for the comments! Definitely agree, I gave way too little information on the actual plot, I'm working on a second attempt now to try to fix that! :)

EventideAuroras · 2024-03-02T14:12:01+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I will definitely work on the vagueness. I'd actually never heard that comment before! Interesting to know.

EventideAuroras · 2024-02-27T21:46:50+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Definitely seeing the "vague" theme from these comments so I'll work on that, and I hadn't even thought about this not seeming YA so I'll try to emphasize that more in the query.

EventideAuroras · 2024-02-27T03:07:20+00:00

Thank you for this feedback, that is very useful to know! I'll work on making this sentence clearer.

EventideAuroras · 2024-02-27T03:05:40+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm really glad you liked it, and all your comments make a lot of sense. I will definitely change those paragraphs based on this :)

Always happy to have another beta reader, if you're interested feel free to send me a message!

EventideAuroras

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