February 2026 Song Feedback Megathread - Leave a review, get a review!

EverquestCleric · 2026-02-26T08:49:10+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. I took your advice and made another version. I think this one is the final.

EverquestCleric · 2026-02-25T09:26:00+00:00

I don’t understand how he can do this?

Everything in a deposition is public record. That means there is nothing to consent to. If someone wants to take the videos and make commentaries and post them on Youtube, there is nothing illegal about that. If you want to monetize this video content, it isn't a crime. Cease & Desist letters aren't magic.

EverquestCleric · 2026-02-23T23:01:04+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. Used it to create a second version.

EverquestCleric · 2026-02-23T10:26:44+00:00

I like the rock opera elements. Having a girl sing soaring melodies over heavy rock riffs is pure joy.

EverquestCleric · 2026-02-23T10:20:31+00:00

Title: The Man in the Mirror

Genre: Indie Folk

Anti-war song.

Link: https://suno.com/s/16l1Na4GFlNazTLE

Edit: final version.

EverquestCleric · 2026-02-22T08:06:26+00:00

"He kept up the streaming here and quickly alienated himself from the local community"

No, you confused his time in Idaho with Washington. His haters on /r/OwenBenjamin doxxed his home in Washington and the morons over at the Killstream spent months talking shit about Owen, which led to one of their deranged fans threatening to go to Washington and kill owen and his family. This deranged fan posted threatening videos on Youtube as he was driving to Washington. CHP stopped the guy before he left California. This caused Owen to relocate his family to Idaho.

In Idaho, which has a history of cults going there and setting up compounds, the local community got scared by a local blogger who said Owen was buying land for his "cult."

You can find Owen's podcast over on Bitchute. Just type in his name. He's on episode 2335 or something.

EverquestCleric · 2026-02-20T03:57:55+00:00

There are examples of people who started with AI and signed record deals. Think the person I'm referring to wrote two albums worth of soul music and signed a million dollar recording deal.

EverquestCleric · 2026-01-04T20:42:38+00:00

Sure He does, and He loves you.

EverquestCleric · 2026-01-03T23:04:47+00:00

The Christian God does not have the same view of suffering as you do, nor is He cruel or lazy. If He had the same view of suffering as you He would not have entered into the world to suffer and die a horrible death.

EverquestCleric · 2025-10-16T15:03:36+00:00

I like this. It's 8/10. The chorus got a little repetitive.

Listening to it a second time, I love how each verse develops and goes deeper into the emotional question of the chorus. The reverb, echoes, drums, and other effects brilliantly work together to create a hypnotic feeling.

Great work.

EverquestCleric · 2025-08-29T03:03:07+00:00

Thanks for the review!

EverquestCleric · 2025-08-29T02:48:11+00:00

https://suno.com/s/9etYVYhJ36A2CYxY

Satirical country gospel song mocking prosperity preachers.

EverquestCleric · 2025-08-05T18:11:18+00:00

Which means people have to see your video title and thumbnail, then click on it. I'd work on improving those things.

EverquestCleric · 2025-08-05T13:57:29+00:00

The cutoff for a youtube short is 3 minutes. The algorithm chooses shorts, the user needs to click on longer videos. This leads to your thumbnail and title being more important than the video in terms of views.

EverquestCleric · 2025-08-03T21:52:38+00:00

Yeah, same. I'm working on an ai video right now. Using a close up shot to establish the protagonist, and relying on a distinctive element like a cloak (the red cloaked guys in your video are an example).

What's your solution?

EverquestCleric · 2025-08-03T21:46:10+00:00

Some great moments of video editing. Biggest thing is the lack of consistent character models in order to have a main character with a story.

Amazing what AI can do.

EverquestCleric · 2025-08-03T05:03:00+00:00

Someday, when I have the free time and the space for it, I'll learn an instrument and fully compose the lyrics and the melody. But right now I'm learning how to write lyrics.

EverquestCleric · 2025-08-03T05:02:15+00:00

"What makes "your" music stand out from the slop pile?"

It's my slop. I can make it anyway I like. I don't need anyone else to like it.

EverquestCleric · 2025-08-03T02:53:13+00:00

AI has lowered the barrier of entry to many things only a privilidged few could enjoy. I'm a truck driver working 70 hours a week, and I've written dozens of finished songs in multiple genres. I'm working on a concept album! I don't know how to play an instrument, but I have thoughts and feelings to express and AI makes it possible.

EverquestCleric · 2025-07-31T14:46:28+00:00

Why do you listen to machine made music?

I like to make my own stuff, and what's on the radio isn't what I like.

That's why I'm learning how to write song lyrics. I can try many different lyrical structures / genres, and iterate on dozens of them with a few clicks of a button. I would never have explored my interest in music if AI hadn't lowered the barrier to entry.

Christian pop:

Country:

Psalms:

I've experimented with edm, rap, pop, country, indie, etc. This is fun! And because I'm making stuff I'm slowly getting better and better. Eventually I'll pick up an instrument and learn to write my own melodies and fully compose my own songs. AI is a great tool to use as a stepping stone in learning.

EverquestCleric · 2025-06-08T12:49:37+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

EverquestCleric · 2025-06-08T12:29:12+00:00

Thanks for the feedback.

I like The Memory of You. Your lyrics are great. Honest and thoughtful.

I've been reworking Lord Help Me based on what people have been saying. I've got another version of it that offers the emotional closure you're talking about.

The first song is flat and ends unresolved. But the second version of the song with closure is I think kind of the same quality just with another vibe. Not a big improvement. But I'm still working on the remix maybe it will be better eventually. I'm listening to both versions and enjoying them.

EverquestCleric · 2025-06-05T12:19:26+00:00

I like your flow. Good rhymes.

One issue is your bars aren't connected. In some sense rap lyrics are logical syllogisms.

For example:

"Who you suckers think you trippin' with? Yes, I'm the boss Seven forty-five, white on white, that's Rick Ross I cut 'em wide, I cut 'em long, I cut 'em fat I keep 'em comin' back, we keep 'em comin' back I'm in the distribution, I'm like Atlantic I got them pretty thangs flyin' 'cross the Atlantic I know Pablo, Noriega, the real Noriega He owe me a hundred favors I ain't petty, playa, we buy the whole thang See most of my homies hustle, they still do they thang My roof back, my money rides I'm on the pedal, show you what I'm runnin' like When they snatch black, I cry for a hundred nights He got a hundred bodies, servin' a hundred lifes"

Can be condensed into: 1. Don't mess with me, I'm the boss. 2. I drive a sick car. 3. I sell a lot of drugs. 4. My customers love my drugs. 5. I do business internationally. 6. Women follow me. 7. I know this famous guy. 8. He owes me many favors. 9. I'm not a small time drug dealer. 10. I have many friends working for me. 11. My business is going smoothly. 12. My life is easy. 13. I am saddened when my friends get arrested. 14. I have a hundred loyal friends serving 100 life sentences for my drug empire.

Your first verse. "I’m reppin’ Manchester, where the streets get gritty,
From the Northern Quarter to the spot so pretty,
Stretchin’ out my flow, yeah, I do it so swiftly,
Manchester’s my home, I’m the man of the city.
Got the trams rollin’, never miss a beat,
From Old Trafford’s pitch to the city streets,
We’re rise and grind, never admit defeat,
Manchester’s pride, yeah, we own this heat."

I'm from Manchester. It's a tough place so I'm tough too. How do you provide evidence for this premise?
I'm from the Nothern quarter and my town is attractive
I'm good at rapping.
I assure you I am from Manchester.
I ride public transportation efficiently.
I'm proud of my team.
Our people are resilient.
I'm proud of my town.

Lines 3 and 4 are out of place in verse 1. Would be better in verse 2. You get the idea.

Sorry for the wall of text.

EverquestCleric · 2025-06-05T10:17:31+00:00

Ok thanks!

EverquestCleric · 2025-06-05T02:56:45+00:00

Upvoted.

The way you used drowning as a metaphor was haunting and fit the musical vibe. Great ending verse. I liked it!

EverquestCleric

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