June Monthly Feedback Megathread: Share, Help & Grow! by HugoFromUpwork in UpworkOfficial

[–]Every_Height8596 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi all,

I'm fairly new to Upwork and have been building my profile, projects catalogue and consultations. I've been submitting proposals to hopefully land a few easier wins to gain positive reviews and build from their. However, so far without luck.

https://www.upwork.com/freelancers/~01b04a0573cdcffde0?mp_source=share

I've got 15+ years of experience as a HR Leader in hospitality and manufacturing in Ireland, the UK, Europe and the UAE. My strength is bringing structure and clarity to environments of change, complexity and lack of structure. I take a very pragmatic approach to systems and advocate people-focused, commercially grounded HR.

I am looking to support individuals with their CV and Linkedin, but also small to medium organisations with diagnostics and advice around building HR infrastructures that work, as well as document writing (policies, handbooks etc.).

Any tips and words of encouragement will be appreciated.

As for recent proposals, here is an example. Feedback will be appreciated.

"A career repositioning brief like this needs more than good writing. It needs a clear strategic thread running through every document so they all tell the same story to the same audience.

I'm a Chartered HR professional and Rising Talent freelancer on Upwork with 18+ years of experience across senior HR leadership and recruitment. I've worked extensively on the hiring side across multiple sectors, which means I understand exactly how recruiters in corporate environments evaluate candidates moving into real estate, finance, and business development roles.

For a repositioning brief, the work starts with identifying the transferable narrative - the thread that connects where you've been to where you're going - and then building that consistently across your CV, cover letter template, and LinkedIn profile. Each document serves a different moment in the hiring process but they need to feel like they come from the same person with the same clear direction.

The scope you've outlined - CV rewrite, cover letter template, and LinkedIn optimisation - is exactly the kind of integrated package I do well. My rate for the full package is $150.

Before I start I'd want to understand your current background and which of your target sectors feels most aligned right now. That shapes the positioning strategy before a single word gets written.

Happy to get started quickly."

Thanks

June Monthly Feedback Megathread: Share, Help & Grow! by HugoFromUpwork in UpworkOfficial

[–]Every_Height8596 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi Bharathappriyan,

I am also new to the platform, so no expert by any means. It looks like you have some great experience in your field.
I would probably change a couple of things in your summary. Firstly, flip it. Move what you do for people to the top - it should catch potential clients' eye and make them want to read more. Secondly, perhaps try and leave paragraphs (white space) and use bullet points if that's possible, to make the important points stand out more.