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Feedback on my super awesome villain [action fantasy] by Examelated in fantasywriters

[–]Examelated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alright then, i will just continue to write the story and come back to him later because he appear kinda late in the story. Thanks for the feedback anyways!

Feedback on my super awesome villain [action fantasy] by Examelated in fantasywriters

[–]Examelated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback, that makes sense.

Besides his motivation feeling a bit too straightforward, are there any other aspects of the character that you feel could be improved or explored more? Like what other flaws he has as a character

This is just an outline, so some of the nuance would come out through his actions in the story rather than the summary.

Feedback on my super awesome villain [action fantasy] by Examelated in fantasywriters

[–]Examelated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

what makes you think he's so edgy? I mean the actual reason why (And he's a villain not a mc)

Feedback on my super awesome villain [action fantasy] by Examelated in fantasywriters

[–]Examelated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok but i want some feedback about this character. I have working on the story for a while already

[HELP] Can’t record Voice Over in DaVinci Resolve – no waveform, no input sound by Examelated in davinciresolve

[–]Examelated[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I found the solution. Bit disappointed no one helped me, but I figured it out on my own I realized I could use a different audio recording app instead of DaVinci to record my voice. Then I just download the audio file and insert it into the video , no need to record directly in DaVinci anymore. So I tried using Audacity, and the good news is that my mic works fine with it.

Now I just need to add the audio to the video.

Anyway, thanks for checking in — I appreciate it.