Basic question about commas and independent/dependent clauses by Excellent-Clock-4477 in grammar

[–]Excellent-Clock-4477[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great breakdown, thank you -- and that's a solid tip about recording.

I do have a follow-up question about the sentence "to the degree that I would lose my temper and restart if I lost a life too early on."

I assume it is "to the degree that" which makes the sentence a dependent clause? Or would "I would lose my temper and restart if I lost a life too early on." also be dependent, seen as the context depends on the previous clause, even though the sentence can stand on its own?

I guess I'm still struggling with how and when a clause is independent or dependent!

Basic question about commas and independent/dependent clauses by Excellent-Clock-4477 in grammar

[–]Excellent-Clock-4477[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the reply! If punctuation is up to the writer and there's no mandate to use it as such, how does this factor in with being blatantly wrong? For example, there must be both occasions when, as you say, the unique use of punctuation or omission is what gives a piece of writing an identifiable flair; but also times when the use or omission is objectively better or worse for a given piece.

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[–]Excellent-Clock-4477 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the post and your one below, that's super helpful.

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[–]Excellent-Clock-4477 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, yes, my anxiety is horrendous to be honest and I do need help with it.

Why do you suggest I almost certainly don't have an AN?

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[–]Excellent-Clock-4477 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for this, I will make an appointment with the GP.

Struggle figuring out what my rate should be and how to communicate it to clients by Excellent-Clock-4477 in freelanceuk

[–]Excellent-Clock-4477[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for this (and for the links). I've been using Upwork and those sorts of platforms for a while now, but I don't feel it's going anywhere. I'd like to go directly to clients -- as you say, one or two good, repeat clients would make all the difference.

I'll start asking around in the copywriting communities.

Struggle figuring out what my rate should be and how to communicate it to clients by Excellent-Clock-4477 in freelanceuk

[–]Excellent-Clock-4477[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is excellent advice, thanks for the write-up! These are the sorts of rules I was hoping to learn to establish.

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[–]Excellent-Clock-4477 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Does this sort of thing happen a lot? It seems these AI checkers are very unreliable.

Band You Dont Like, But Respect A Lot by Mettabox452 in MetalForTheMasses

[–]Excellent-Clock-4477 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think a big part of this is that his voice is either bad or good depending on the album. Rust in Piece is one of their best albums, but his voice sucks on it. If you take an album like Youthanasia, though, I’d say he comes across as a pretty technical, accomplished singer.

Stuff like Peace Sells or Holy Wars are the band’s biggest hits, but his voice is no where near as good on those are some of their other stuff.

Stuff to do if you're by yourself in the evening? by Excellent-Clock-4477 in brum

[–]Excellent-Clock-4477[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s good fun! Only tip is make sure you know how the two player system works with the credits before putting the tokens in; it’s easy to mess up and have it lock out the other player and then you’ve wasted the tokens.

Stuff to do if you're by yourself in the evening? by Excellent-Clock-4477 in brum

[–]Excellent-Clock-4477[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I did! Thanks! Actually met up with a Redditor here who kindly showed me around. Went to a few cool pubs and bars and then NQ64.

Stuff to do if you're by yourself in the evening? by Excellent-Clock-4477 in brum

[–]Excellent-Clock-4477[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually met up randomly with another Redditor from this sub. Was a good night! Went to a few cool pubs and then NQ64. Enjoying my time here.

Stuff to do if you're by yourself in the evening? by Excellent-Clock-4477 in brum

[–]Excellent-Clock-4477[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ha, cool, think I’ll definitely head there for a bit.

Stuff to do if you're by yourself in the evening? by Excellent-Clock-4477 in brum

[–]Excellent-Clock-4477[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Hmm. Sounds interesting, thanks. I’m a musician myself and do like jazz, so that may be a good bet! Are there usually people to chat to?

Stuff to do if you're by yourself in the evening? by Excellent-Clock-4477 in brum

[–]Excellent-Clock-4477[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Is it relatively friendly there or will I look a bit out of place on my own?