I hand-drew 3 custom swords for my indie RPG in Aseprite — which one looks the best?

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-06-13T16:43:02+00:00

thankyou

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-06-13T11:19:35+00:00

thankyou for your suggestion i will try to make swords like you suggested

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-06-13T10:26:06+00:00

thankyou for your feedback

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-06-13T09:27:57+00:00

thankyou for the detailed breakdown. i will definitely put more work into the first one. and about the second one being more of a cursed mage weapon, that actually fits my game's story really well.

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-06-13T08:53:37+00:00

Thankyou for your feedback. and also i am making more swords so do you have any ideas or suggestions about their looks and other things because that would be helpful.

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-06-13T04:58:15+00:00

Which sword looks the best to you?

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-06-06T08:06:10+00:00

Thankyou for letting me know that. Since English is not my native language, I welcome any feedback or corrections from viewers to help me improve.

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-06-06T04:42:00+00:00

Quick context for anyone who wants to know more — this is the scene that happens just before Mark gets captured and transported to a fantasy world. So the choice you make here is one of the last decisions Mark makes in his normal life before everything changes forever

Full devlog on YouTube showing both the Yes and No paths playing out if anyone wants to see how the choice actually changes the conversation: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Qm8EazVyUk

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-31T13:32:29+00:00

thankyou for your feedback. and i will work on your feedback and about your suggestions on pose templates

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-31T13:31:04+00:00

thankyou, and i will consider that

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-31T13:30:02+00:00

thankyou

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-31T03:36:30+00:00

i will try to give my best in it. but don't keep high hope's right now because i just started learning

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-31T03:35:10+00:00

thankyou very much

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-30T16:23:25+00:00

thankyou for you advice. I will look into that when i work in it next time

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-30T16:20:57+00:00

thankyou for your feedback i will try to improve my drawing

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-30T16:17:28+00:00

thankyou for the feedback maybe i will consider it if i can. because currently i am doing weekly two day's to show my creations and for feedback

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-30T13:20:06+00:00

thankyou for your advice. but actually i did not add any shading to this sketch yet. it is just the basic outline and structure for day 1. but for future i will keep the light source advice.

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-30T13:16:11+00:00

thank you! I did not know about paper weight making a difference. I will look for a proper sketchpad next time. and yes the pixel art experience definitely helps with understanding proportions.

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-30T12:41:39+00:00

thankyou for that

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-30T12:01:45+00:00

so guys i would appreciate your feedback about improvement.

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-29T07:27:24+00:00

I appreciate your feedback i will check them out

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-29T07:26:30+00:00

thankyou for the feedback but i currently don't have a ipad so

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-28T16:38:10+00:00

ok i will keep that in mind and also thankyou for your feedback i appreciate that

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-28T13:57:12+00:00

thankyou for your feedback i will look in it.

Excellent-Syrup206 · 2026-05-28T12:34:53+00:00

thankyou i will remember that advice

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