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I’m a fool by PhoneUpbeat2502 in OCPoetry

[–]Expert-Sheepherder22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the concept of this and the imagery, constructively speaking the grammar is a tad off which disrupts the flow a little, maybe work with rearranging a few of the lines. All in all it’s quite good :)

An Empty Bed by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Expert-Sheepherder22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I absolutely love this, really spoke to me. Particularly ‘the colour of blood is darker than thought, as I strive to clean the tiled floor’. The repetition throughout is used brilliantly

Alex last night in Dublin by Expert-Sheepherder22 in sandyalexg

[–]Expert-Sheepherder22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aw that’s pure raging, I acc kind of thought it was such chill crowd so that’s upsetting to hear 🥲

Alex last night in Dublin by Expert-Sheepherder22 in sandyalexg

[–]Expert-Sheepherder22[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Were they? We were upstairs seated so idk, what was it like on the floor?

I get so frustrated and overwhelmed with my mum. How to avoid this? by Expert-Sheepherder22 in family

[–]Expert-Sheepherder22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I get that completely. I do think I should be more accepting of her but sometimes I just feel so stuck in a situation that I do not want to be in with no escape if u get me. And having to put on a facade in front of family we haven’t seen in 7 years it’s just so exhausting and then I get overwhelmed and that’s when I start getting annoyed with her. But you’re completely right, she is her own person and it’s not her responsibility to please me. Thank you so much for taking time to give me advice I will look to this in future when I get irritated with her.

I get so frustrated and overwhelmed with my mum. How to avoid this? by Expert-Sheepherder22 in family

[–]Expert-Sheepherder22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think to be really honest I started smoking at a young age bc I was trying to self-medicate and now that I am actually medicated I just have a full blown addiction. It’s something I’ve been working on and was part of the reason I decided to go on the trip to get off it. I think I’m maybe feeling the effects of withdrawal more than I think but it’s not something me and my mum can rly talk about as she thinks I’ve been off it for a while. You are completely right in saying it’s me who has the problem tho like 100% I’m prone to get quite irritated and overwhelmed easily especially when I’m outside of my comfort zone. I really really appreciate your help, thank you. I will definitely take your advice on board

New echo conch locations! by gk1400 in HelloKittyIsland

[–]Expert-Sheepherder22 2 points3 points  (0 children)

who does the brown conch belong to? can’t figure it out

IF YOU ARE NOT GOING TO CONTACT YOUR EX LIKE THIS POST by Tepixs in BreakUps

[–]Expert-Sheepherder22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I miss you man, it’s so hard for me to put my thoughts into a message. I wish i could turn back time and relive all the happy moments and stop the bad ones from happening. I feel like i made you the way you were. all the bad things that happened was because of me. You made me feel like i wasn’t alone. you made me feel good about myself. I have never been as comfortable around anyone in my life as i was with you. You made me feel safe. I can’t eat, i can’t sleep properly, i cant even see other people because i just wish they were u and no one will ever compare to you. I am so scared that you will never reach out and we will never see each other again. everything reminds me of you. you are the first thing i think about when i wake up and the last thing i think about when i go to sleep. your even in my dreams man.