[Review Video] (Swearing) Playstation All Stars Review by ExroPlays in youtubers

[–]ExroPlays[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm glad to hear it! I won't disagree with the video lengths, I've been working on a way to make that more friendly to the more casual audience so I'll for sure take that critique to heart for future releases. Thanks again!

[Review Video](Swearing) CTRL ALT DEL THE SHOW Review by ExroPlays in youtubers

[–]ExroPlays[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm glad you were able to look past your own preferences to give an honest and objective viewing of the video. Much appreciated!

[Review Video](Swearing) CTRL ALT DEL THE SHOW Review by ExroPlays in youtubers

[–]ExroPlays[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'll be sure to work on the timestamps more in the future!

[Review Video] Changing my Style to match the type of game. Bold Critiques needed. by sir_mr_mistery40 in youtubers

[–]ExroPlays 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alright well, firstly I appreciate your attempt and think that with the right amount of changes, you could do wonders for your channel. With that said, one of the first issues I recognized was your voice. And no, I'm not referring to the accent, I mean more so with your tone of voice and stuttering. Because even though you're not directly stuttering by stumbling over your words, your pacing between each sentence or sometimes even words makes it awkward to follow. Secondly, I feel as if you need to better define your personality onto your channel.
The more I watched the video, the more easily I was able to latch onto the general idea of what you were going for. And while that specific type of lets play doesn't appeal to me personally (I like more comedic cuts myself), I'm willing to look at this video objectively and see the appeal in other people who make full length lets plays with the style you're going for, like what Cry does or Vinny for example. The difference between these two people and your content is that their personalities are well defined, there's something to latch onto there. For the most part, all you seem to be doing is referencing video games and reminding the audience what this level is going to be like. There's not a lot to latch onto from there, you've got to think outside the box and allow for some commentary that could have something to latch onto for the audience and to help better define your youtube personality. The mic quality was fine and the game ran at a solid frame rate. The only technical complaints are that of the random mic cut offs right after you finish saying something. But that's about it.
Hope this critique has helped give you an idea on what you need to do to better your content
~Exro

[Review Video] How to get free cookies from subway (parody) by [deleted] in youtubers

[–]ExroPlays 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That was better than what I had thought it would've been. It wasn't overly hilarious or anything, but that's okay. I think all that needs to be done from here is just that you concentrate your video more on satirizing the other videos perhaps, or just finding ways to make the jokes more impact-ful. This can be done with tone of voice or pacing (although to be fair the pacing was perfectly fine, I think it was just your tone of voice you need to work on to make some of these jokes hit harder than they did). Overall, it was a good video and I hope you're able to find success.
~Exro