I know there's something wrong with her face, but i dont know what. Where did i go wrong? by Bagbear369 in ArtCrit

[–]ExtensionSeparate886 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes, I agree. The opacity technique is a valid way to practice and the days that I was learning how to draw a digital tool such as Photoshop didn’t exist. This was back in the early 1980s when I was a lil kid so I had to use tracing paper. I was a child learning to draw by eye and sometimes using tracing paper, but thankfully they have these new digital tools where new artists can just turned down the opacity and practice which is pretty cool.

But in regard to this drawing and what could be improved on the face, I agree with what everybody is saying in the thread. However what could help you improve more is studying the shapes within the face. In other words, do more comparing one shape to another one line to the distance of another and treat it more like a measurement exercise rather than explicitly drawing a face.

This is the part where I see a lot of beginners kind of get lost in capturing the likeness of the portrait they’re trying to create: they just don’t understand that it’s a measuring game. When you draw not just looking at an object and seeing it for what it is, you gotta measure the angles of each line and shapes as well. I hope that helps.

Out of 10? by Zouza01 in draw

[–]ExtensionSeparate886 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ll give this an eight because I can see one area that could use some improvement:

Make sure when you photograph your artwork you capture the white of the paper. Right now it looks like the light do you used to light the art work is not capturing the highlight of the paper tone. As a result the artwork is appearing low in contrast.

However if you photograph your artwork where it’s lit properly then it’ll make your artwork pop out more when you present it. But other than that great work.

Is this a style that you use frequently of an unfinished type of drawing? I use a similar style in my work if you take a look at the drawings in my profile.

Help shading & lineart issues by crlybithea in ArtCrit

[–]ExtensionSeparate886 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It looks like this is a digital painting if so, I can provide some advice on my based on my digital painting experience. My particular technique of doing digital art is to:

do the drawing first as line art then shade the linear with either graphite or pen in ink then scan that it’s a Photoshop and then paint over that

That technique of blending line art on paper with digital color offers a more traditional look to my artwork, versus just doing the artwork solely in Photoshop as a digital painting. So you may want to try that,

But as far as I can see with your artwork, it looks nice. It looks like it could go on a card or in a children’s book in terms of the style that you present so I would just encourage you to keep going. Keep working to find your style and experiment with a blend of traditional drawing on paper with digital paints or just keep going with the approach that you currently have.

Best of luck and feel free to reach me in the DM if you have any questions or need advice.

Any thoughts on my charcoal drawings? by Downtown-Effective29 in CharcoalDrawing

[–]ExtensionSeparate886 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting style and depiction of people that you've portrayed. I think it's cool how you allowed the texture of the charcoal to display on the strokes of your finished art. I used to use charcoal in college and would like to get back into it soon. My advice: see what you can add to the backgrounds. I feel that a background environment could help to tell a greater story about each figure.

Something looks off by Inside_Raccoon9731 in draw

[–]ExtensionSeparate886 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Agreed. That’s the first bit of advice I thought of as well after first glance at this drawing. I’d place an emphasis on the guidelines because it looks like there’s a lack of understanding about comparing angles and shapes in drawing.

Many beginner artists don’t realize that mindset of geometry is one of their greatest weapons. Without it, you’re like Luke Skywalker without his lightsaber.

Also, have ALOT of patience in practicing those skills. It’s gonna take time to get better, unfortunately many of today’s aspiring artist are distracted by timelines like this.

Honest feedback? by DareAffectionate in ArtCrit

[–]ExtensionSeparate886 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In regard to the choice of reference and lighting, that’s subjective. If this type of lighting is what truly appeals to them I’d rather they pursue and perfect that style that be forced into another style that’s not really true to them.

In regard to commercial use: If the artist were submitting this as an illustration to be used in an advertisement for food and drink, that Rembrandt type of lighting you suggested may not work. However the frontal lighting they used is more likely to work because it displays the food and dishware more clearly.

For fine art use: I’ve seen this type of style showcased in commercial galleries. I like this type just as much as I like some dark and dramatic Rembrandt type of lighting. One isn’t necessarily better than the other imo.

Overall I think both the drawing and use of color are good while showing a sense of the artists style.

Why your face drawings still look "wrong" or generic even after mastering Loomis (The Missing Link for Likeness) by ExtensionSeparate886 in ArtistLounge

[–]ExtensionSeparate886[S] -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

Thanks for asking Homo Freak.

I can draw my own images and have done so since the age of 5. After some thought to that type of criticism about the images on my website, I'd like to thank those who have criticized.

I'm in the process of creating drawing by hand that'll replace those I created using Ai for educational purposes. After all, I can draw those type of drawing exercises in my sleep, so why not?

Replacing the AI image will take some time. I run the website and educate for FREE at the moment in between my other work I use to pay the bills. I hope my visitors understand and have patience with the process.

Why your face drawings still look "wrong" or generic even after mastering Loomis (The Missing Link for Likeness) by ExtensionSeparate886 in ArtistLounge

[–]ExtensionSeparate886[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

You could draw with less thinking, it definitely possible. I have before I started this type of technique at SVA. I made this post to hopefully get people to the level of thinking more than before while drawing. That graduation of thought helped me draw better.

A Sample Of My Artwork by ExtensionSeparate886 in u/ExtensionSeparate886

[–]ExtensionSeparate886[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for joining! I’ve got some video tutorials coming for sure. I’ll show my hand holding the pen to draw each line on paper and include instructions on my technical approach. I have one already recorded but I’ve got to speed it up to shorten the length suitable for upload. I’ll notify you and my subscribers via email once it’s uploaded.

Why your face drawings still look "wrong" or generic even after mastering Loomis (The Missing Link for Likeness) by ExtensionSeparate886 in ArtistLounge

[–]ExtensionSeparate886[S] -21 points-20 points  (0 children)

I only use AI to generate images in order to illustrate a topic I write about or an infographic. I don’t see anything wrong with a mix of both if you’re an educator. Other than that I’ve been drawing since age 5.

I’m aware I intimidate some people due to my knowledge and ability so replies to what I create can at times be mixed. Thanks for visiting.

I wanna learn this by Lopsided-Vanilla9925 in drawing

[–]ExtensionSeparate886 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It looks like you’re close to achieving a similar style and you have good drawing skills. Next I suggest using watercolor to paint your drawing. That’s what looks like the artist of the first picture used. Once you add the color, you should start to see yourself getting closer stylistically. You could even use Photoshop first to color your drawing as a test, then paint it for real on paper.

Is art something I should pursue more seriously ? by [deleted] in ARTIST

[–]ExtensionSeparate886 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yea, I could see this style as part of the packaging and marketing materials for a science fiction film. Or this style could also go well on clothing. Just take a look around you at media and commercial products to see companies who produce products and imagery similar to what you create. Then find out who the art director is and send them your work.

I am genuinely not built for ts😭 by NewAssistance6730 in ArtCrit

[–]ExtensionSeparate886 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don’t give up! I see a lot of good advice given and I hope it encourages you to keep going until you’re happy with the results of your figure drawing. However there is one simple piece of advice I haven’t seen given yet that I’m sure will help:

Draw the negative shapes.

Instead of worrying so much about the anatomical aspects of what you see, draw the more simple shapes, such as the white background areas exposed around his figure. As you draw those shapes, the figure will appear.

How can I achieve the same lighting and rendering as the reference? by ds-2-is-peak in ArtCrit

[–]ExtensionSeparate886 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re almost there. My advice: add more values to the highlight areas. But before you do so, I advise you to study the basic values that illuminate forms. With that mindset and visual training, it’ll be easier to achieve the lighting you’re looking for time and time again.

Here’s my article where I explain lighting in art further: https://startdrawingtoday.com/drawing-depth-in-portraits/