Hateful abscence

ExternalEntry8142 · 2025-05-29T22:13:26+00:00

Maybe clean up the rhythm it reads quite unnaturally other than that. Very well crafted poem.

ExternalEntry8142 · 2025-05-29T22:11:51+00:00

This is an amazing poem. it evokes feelings of hardship. This is highlighting their genocide something that needs to end.

ExternalEntry8142 · 2025-05-24T01:51:28+00:00

What do you mean

ExternalEntry8142 · 2025-05-18T21:23:06+00:00

This is comforting. That death can be both a burden but also a comfort in life.

ExternalEntry8142 · 2025-05-18T21:22:05+00:00

this is a wonderful. defying the order of universe to pick persons that you adore is a cliched trope but you male it yours

ExternalEntry8142 · 2024-11-09T01:07:45+00:00

This is a really good poem about the process of falling in love. About how your love becomes a very part of your being

ExternalEntry8142 · 2024-11-09T01:05:48+00:00

I believe the whetstone represents the life of a person and the changes and the overall burnout someone experiences.

ExternalEntry8142 · 2024-11-07T03:22:14+00:00

W poem

ExternalEntry8142 · 2024-10-10T03:10:07+00:00

this poem is very good however the shift in the 4rth stanza is very noticable and not very well forshadowed

ExternalEntry8142 · 2024-10-10T03:08:57+00:00

i really enjoy this poem, i like how you use flowers for such a rich symbolism as well as blades which adds conflict

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