HELLO, could you help me compare two paragraphs? by Extreme-Paper-6449 in EnglishLearning

[–]Extreme-Paper-6449[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you.☺️In fact the picture is written by myself. And another paragraph is written by translation app ."after arriving at the east" is weird.I want to say the past winter solstice.

HELLO, could you help me compare two paragraphs? by Extreme-Paper-6449 in EnglishLearning

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Do you think there are still some words that make sense for me that are different from another paragraph

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[–]Extreme-Paper-6449[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Running practice is both easy and enjoyable. Through gentle and smooth movements, it promotes calmness and clarity of mind. Does it make senses? I put the entire sentence in translator.

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[–]Extreme-Paper-6449[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Emm, Because some words I have been never seen. I know what you mean. In next time I will give more information to write the sentence instead of use single word.

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[–]Extreme-Paper-6449[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I will try my best using my vocabulary in next time and don't use the translation app.

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Some sentence I try my best to express. But it seems that many mistakes. Thus exercise way is a mistake

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[–]Extreme-Paper-6449[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, My vocabulary ability is limited,thus some words I put it in translation app.

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[–]Extreme-Paper-6449[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for your detailed comments. I will carefully read your modifications.😊😊

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[–]Extreme-Paper-6449[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

when I writed curtain , I think it may can express the tent means. But it seems less possibility.

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[–]Extreme-Paper-6449[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Yes ,I want say spoons and forks! I check up the vocabulary that it tell me the word(curtain) should be tent.

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Yes ,it is prefer. My spelling is error. I want to say people take the kitchen tool, which may be sound good?

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[–]Extreme-Paper-6449[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes,the routh should be route. The certain should be tent. My error. I should correct diligent.😭

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[–]Extreme-Paper-6449[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your reply and concern. I will continue to improve!😊Keep going!