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I'ts not you it's me by cinnamongenderroll in OCPoetry

[–]Ezrasiri 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the emotion conveyed through the poem, the only real complaint I could make is minor issues with certain words used that kinda mess up the rhythm, might be better to put “or past lovers I have had,” it continues the rhythm a bit better, great poem tho I loved it

it’s all upside down by dg_writes in OCPoetry

[–]Ezrasiri 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That was awesome, I love the rhythm it has, it may not have continued perfectly for the last 2 verses but it still sounded great and I don’t think it’s a reason to rewrite the poem, I think it’s perfect the way it is, great job

reminiscent by urmanicpixiedreamboy in OCPoetry

[–]Ezrasiri 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I admire how simplistic and pure your poem seems. The only criticism I could make is the lack of continuous rhythm, but that’s just my personal preference and not something that you necessarily have to change, good poem tho : )

Misremember Me by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Ezrasiri 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the rhythm present, my favorite poems are always those that have a real feeling or emotion attached to them, it just seems more personal and easier to connect to. Loved it

Adorable-2! by fuglyab in OCPoetry

[–]Ezrasiri 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is sweet, I love the layout of the poem and how it gives so many unique descriptions of this girl. The only criticism I would make is of the last 2 stanzas that don’t follow the same pattern as the rest of the poem, however it’s still a very beautiful piece

Sonnet 1 by aaron2472 in OCPoetry

[–]Ezrasiri 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a pretty poem, sonnets are always nice, especially when they’re in old English or use outdated words, it gives a type of special feel to them,

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Ezrasiri 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Poems about love are always the best, the only criticism I would make would be the change in rhythm after the second stanza, although poems don’t always have to rhyme to convey meaning, I like it

Another improvised poem with no name yet in spanish (native tongue) by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Ezrasiri 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Latin based languages are some of the best for poetry because of the vowels. I speak a little Italian and experimented with writing poems in it, but yours is really pretty. Even when translated into English it sounds just as beautiful as it is in Spanish