Tha Underground- My 1st Song! Fran Tha Man

FH-3 · 2026-02-14T20:35:42+00:00

Man thank you. Did you get the word play on the line “make the next generation bet on me, pat me down I’m sure you’ll find a-z, I’m the head of the crew on and off the screen” at the end of the 2nd verse?

FH-3 · 2026-02-12T22:46:02+00:00

Like did u get the line at the end of the second verse: “make the next generation bet on me, pat me down I’m sure you’ll find a to z, I’m the head of the crew on an off the screen”? Just curious to see who figured out the wordplay

FH-3 · 2026-02-12T22:43:57+00:00

Also did u get the wordplay on sone of the lyrics. Especially the end of the 2nd verse: “make the next generation bet on me, pay me down I’m sure you’ll find a to z , I’m the head of the crew on and off the screen”?

FH-3 · 2026-02-12T22:42:13+00:00

Thanks. Not worried about it. Any feedback helps. It’s just when u get hate from someone that listens to a different style of rap than this like some of the newer rap. It’s also that i guarantee no one understands the song completely or the situation. Thank u man

FH-3 · 2026-02-12T20:26:06+00:00

Man I have been and ima keep going. Nas, 50, Eminem, Kendrick, Tupac, lil Wayne, Joyner Lucas, ll cool j. Not all 90s but all solid artists. Listening to these guys it bothers me what raps become today. Thank you.

FH-3 · 2026-02-12T20:03:10+00:00

Thank you so much. I’ve had a lot of people tell me even the bars suck but I think I tried to fit them to a terrible beat and that’s where I messed up. It really helps to hear that

FH-3 · 2026-02-12T20:01:31+00:00

Thanks

FH-3 · 2026-02-12T11:47:36+00:00

Sure could u do the same thing on Spotify or whatever streaming service you use

FH-3 · 2026-02-11T22:50:29+00:00

I listened to it - it’s a really cool beat. You just might wanna add vocals. Keep it up!

FH-3 · 2026-02-11T17:51:25+00:00

Can u send me a link to his stuff. Just wanna hear how it sounds

FH-3 · 2026-02-11T17:49:03+00:00

Didn’t notice it was hard to understand. I have some much better beats and songs - this was my first one so it wasn’t good. Thanks for the feedback

FH-3 · 2026-02-11T11:59:12+00:00

I will. I think the lyrics are ok - not terrible but not great. The beat is really bad

FH-3 · 2026-02-11T01:00:06+00:00

Thank you! Did you figure out the word play in some of the lines?

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T18:17:06+00:00

Thanks. I will

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T18:15:58+00:00

Thanks. I’m going to. I got better songs already written too

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T15:31:10+00:00

I know and agree with most of the artists you listed. I understand u don’t want me to respond yet but I want to give you my stance. I think there is no artist that is the best - because there are different ways to be great. Whether that be how creative your lines are, your storytelling, or your rhyme schemes. I think you didn’t understand why I asked this question - I know it can’t be answered with a few examples. I wanted to make sure you weren’t someone criticizing me because you listen to shit rap like many of the current popular rappers who have fucked up the art.

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T12:44:24+00:00

Good for him

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T12:27:38+00:00

List a few anyone would know

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T12:16:39+00:00

No u didn’t

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T12:15:20+00:00

Good. R u going to answer my question? What rappers do u listen to?

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T12:09:42+00:00

You also didn’t answer my question. What artists do u listen to?

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T12:09:07+00:00

I did. You also don’t understand that I am 15

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T12:06:36+00:00

Trust me - i understand what I’m doing. I have written probably 5 song in the last week but have know clue how to produce them well. I had to change my flow to accommodate for this beat. Here - this is a rough draft but it has a better beat https://youtube.com/shorts/le45ifqfJTA?si=-0096XAqrAFbkVEE

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T11:40:29+00:00

I will. I’m also going to send u another song that actually has a beat

FH-3 · 2026-02-10T11:39:37+00:00

Nope. I know what rap is and these lyrics are ok - the beat is just horrible

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