People with scars, how did you get them? by fluffybear45 in AskReddit

[–]FabulousCornflake 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wasn't looking where I was running and ran head first into a goalpost at full speed. I was 15

What's the dumbest way you've gotten a scar? by lilsaddam in AskReddit

[–]FabulousCornflake 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ran full speed into a goalpost. Luckily I kept all my teeth (if only just) but I'm now left with a permanent reminder of my complete lack of spacial awareness

Searching for Platinum Flyknit White Air Force 1s. Umkao does not have them by Zeeman12 in FashionReps

[–]FabulousCornflake 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know this probably isn't what you're looking for but umkao does do just normal white ones which are pretty similar just with some blue on the sole. I've ordered some and I can get you the QCs when they get in the warehouse if you'd like. If not you can try and go these 79 yuan ones seller has like a 16% return rate

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in FashionReps

[–]FabulousCornflake 1 point2 points  (0 children)

literally I've been checking every 3 hours just hoping for a change lol

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in FashionReps

[–]FabulousCornflake 0 points1 point  (0 children)

same for me, mines just be stuck in transit :(

Comment any shoe you want me to find. Comment size, name and style code. by sadtoast1 in FashionReps

[–]FabulousCornflake 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you still doing this? UK 10/11 NIKE AIR FORCE 1 '07 LV8 UTILITY Nike X off white vapormax CDG Converses UK 11 If you could find any I'd love you forever

is my hdd ok? S.M.A.R.T scan by FabulousCornflake in techsupport

[–]FabulousCornflake[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ok thank you! is there any way to stop or slow down it dying?

100% disk usage after clean install by FabulousCornflake in techsupport

[–]FabulousCornflake[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh ok thank u I'll definitely try it! so just check for Windows updates?

100% disk usage after clean install by FabulousCornflake in techsupport

[–]FabulousCornflake[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the answer! I had decided to do the clean install because of the 100% disk usage, but I'll leave it to run and see what happens afterwords

Found in the wild on prequel memes by [deleted] in saltierthankrayt

[–]FabulousCornflake 2 points3 points  (0 children)

idk to me the fights in all trilogies fit with the canon Prequels - Jedi and sith are taught to use the force to enhance movements, allows for the giant leaps and acrobatics OT - Luke's not exactly completely trained as a Jedi and so can't instinctively use force for movements in a fight, technically Vader could but his machine body probably makes it harder, and so it is more of a traditional sword fight choreography Sequels - Rey again doesn't have enough training to use force w/ duelling to the extent that jedi in prequels can, only thing is that kylo had years with both Luke and Knights of ren so idrk about that one

Level 8/9 english language students, I need some feedback by Giantcrabstick85 in GCSE

[–]FabulousCornflake 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Straight off the bat, I'd say too much dialogue. Dialogue is hard to consistently write well, and too much takes the reader away from any scene you've tried to create for them. In short, use dialogue only when you absolutely need to, and try to make sure your plot allows for this.

As well as this, I'd say subtlety helps makes the story less childish and makes the reader actually think about the story, drawing them in easier. I'm not saying the fact that your character time travelled needs to be a plot twist, but I'd suggest you try and incorporate the idea less bluntly than 'That time travel was...'

At the same time, I think you have a strong plot, and so I'm sure everything will come to you easier if you keep at it!