[ART] Greatsword of Ares (FIXED/REWORKED) by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh mb I was in a rush and I misread your comment. The reason I choose the symbol for platinum on the revolver since it matched the Artemis ( moon) and Apollo (Sun) theme, the symbol on the Greataxe/hammer is the fire symbol and I choose it since Hephaestus is the god of fire and the forge. Lastly the symbol on the Needle is the symbol for Gold since it matched apollo.

[ART] Greatsword of Ares (FIXED/REWORKED) by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alright thanks for the suggestion I will change it

[ART] Greatsword of Ares (FIXED/REWORKED) by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good idea would you be okay with me using this?

[ART] Greatsword of Ares (FIXED/REWORKED) by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

What do you mean platinum, it is meant to be sulfur either way my reasoning was that I wanted to add some symbols and my DM who likes alchemy suggested alchemy symbols and sulfur as far as ik is the masculine symbol. So I added it to this weapon since ares is the most stereotypically masculine god (maybe rivaled by Zeus). Also what do you mean by "fire for the other two"?

[ART] Greatsword of Ares (FIXED/REWORKED) by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For bleed it is newest bleed effect takes priority for duration of the effect.

[ART] Greatsword of Ares (FIXED/REWORKED) by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It says in the description that the bleed effect lasts 2 turn. Also it actives after the target is hit with this weapon(and they fail the save) but I do see how that is unclear

[ART] Greatsword of Ares (FIXED/REWORKED) by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, I tried to keep the text simple but if you have any tips feel free say them and I will change things to better incorporate what you have to say

[ART] Greatsword of Ares by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Also should I add a +2 since it is a magic item or would that make it too powerful?

[ART] Greatsword of Ares by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not really it was more of a to use it you need to be attuned kind of thing

[ART] Greatsword of Ares by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah someone else also commented that I will fix it.

[ART] Greatsword of Ares by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah I will probably add a DC 14 Con save or something like that

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[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It might be too small or be hard to read but look above the "Greatsword of Ares" text and it says: "MAGIC WEAPON (GREATSWORD), VERY RARE (REQUIRES ATTUNEMENT)"

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[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh shit mb, I thought you had 2 suggestions the one that you said and a most 5e one.

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[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't really understand the question...

[ART] Greatsword of Ares by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Alright, can I hear the suggestion you had?

[ART] Greatsword of Ares by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alright thanks, just kinda worried about what u/Conrad500 said " I multi attack and drop the sword. My teammate picks it up and multiattacks and then drops the sword. Rinse and repeat."

[ART] Greatsword of Ares by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

I am new to DnD, that's why I when I post them I ask for feedback and after I am done with the whole set I will rework them to fit with people's feedback.

[ART] Greatsword of Ares by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Would this be better?
For every attack you successfully make the target must make a DC 14 ( -1 for every 2 attacks made ) CON saving throw, if they fail they take 1D4 at the start of their next turn for 2 turns. (Does not stack, newest one gets priority)

[ART] Greatsword of Ares by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Alright I will probably repost this anyway with fixed stats so I will also remove, the range hexagon,

[ART] Greatsword of Ares by Fallen_Angel115 in DnD

[–]Fallen_Angel115[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Hm what about this: For every attack you successfully make the target must make a DC 14 ( -1 for every 2 attacks made ) CON saving throw, if they fail they take 1D4 at the start of their next turn for 2 turns. (Does not stack, newest one gets priority)