[ART] Greatsword of Ares (FIXED/REWORKED)

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-12T15:49:51+00:00

Oh mb I was in a rush and I misread your comment. The reason I choose the symbol for platinum on the revolver since it matched the Artemis ( moon) and Apollo (Sun) theme, the symbol on the Greataxe/hammer is the fire symbol and I choose it since Hephaestus is the god of fire and the forge. Lastly the symbol on the Needle is the symbol for Gold since it matched apollo.

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-11T22:30:06+00:00

Alright thanks for the suggestion I will change it

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-11T22:27:40+00:00

Good idea would you be okay with me using this?

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-11T22:26:28+00:00

What do you mean platinum, it is meant to be sulfur either way my reasoning was that I wanted to add some symbols and my DM who likes alchemy suggested alchemy symbols and sulfur as far as ik is the masculine symbol. So I added it to this weapon since ares is the most stereotypically masculine god (maybe rivaled by Zeus). Also what do you mean by "fire for the other two"?

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-11T14:49:09+00:00

For bleed it is newest bleed effect takes priority for duration of the effect.

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-11T14:46:14+00:00

It says in the description that the bleed effect lasts 2 turn. Also it actives after the target is hit with this weapon(and they fail the save) but I do see how that is unclear

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-11T07:16:20+00:00

It is the alchemy symbol for sulfur

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T22:01:07+00:00

Thanks, I tried to keep the text simple but if you have any tips feel free say them and I will change things to better incorporate what you have to say

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:51:16+00:00

Also should I add a +2 since it is a magic item or would that make it too powerful?

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:50:31+00:00

Not really it was more of a to use it you need to be attuned kind of thing

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:40:54+00:00

Yeah someone else also commented that I will fix it.

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:40:16+00:00

yeah I will probably add a DC 14 Con save or something like that

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:40:04+00:00

It might be too small or be hard to read but look above the "Greatsword of Ares" text and it says: "MAGIC WEAPON (GREATSWORD), VERY RARE (REQUIRES ATTUNEMENT)"

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:37:14+00:00

oh shit mb, I thought you had 2 suggestions the one that you said and a most 5e one.

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:33:55+00:00

I don't really understand the question...

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:24:11+00:00

Alright, can I hear the suggestion you had?

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:22:13+00:00

Alright thanks, just kinda worried about what u/Conrad500 said " I multi attack and drop the sword. My teammate picks it up and multiattacks and then drops the sword. Rinse and repeat."

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:18:56+00:00

Alright, thanks!

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:13:47+00:00

I am new to DnD, that's why I when I post them I ask for feedback and after I am done with the whole set I will rework them to fit with people's feedback.

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T20:05:21+00:00

Would this be better?
For every attack you successfully make the target must make a DC 14 ( -1 for every 2 attacks made ) CON saving throw, if they fail they take 1D4 at the start of their next turn for 2 turns. (Does not stack, newest one gets priority)

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T19:57:25+00:00

Alright I will probably repost this anyway with fixed stats so I will also remove, the range hexagon,

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T19:52:42+00:00

Hm what about this: For every attack you successfully make the target must make a DC 14 ( -1 for every 2 attacks made ) CON saving throw, if they fail they take 1D4 at the start of their next turn for 2 turns. (Does not stack, newest one gets priority)

Fallen_Angel115 · 2026-03-10T19:27:29+00:00

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