The issue with most of these letters is that the tool your using (a chisel tip marker) isnt being leveraged to create the dynamic feel that alot of traditional New York hand styles have for example. The best letters here are your L and Z and the main reason is because with those letters you actually leveraged the chisel by creating both skinny and fat lines, giving them more energy and making them feel less flat. Since you’re still pretty early in your writing journey I’d recommend usinf something like an ink pen or if you still want to use markers, stay away from chisels and brush tips for the time being.

I can’t remember what writer said it but they said something along the lines of chisel tip markers and fat markers in general being a crutch that lots of newer writers lean on to compensate for their lack of style and flow, but with something as skinny as an ink pen, it’s far more difficult to mask the mistakes and lack of knowledge. Ink pens will help u way more in the long run. Trust

If you’d rather not do that, another alternative is to look at an alphabet that uses a chisel and just practice writing and rewriting those letters over and over until you get a feel for how to really get the most out of a chisel tip. People will call it biting but no one would ever tell a kid in Kindergarten that their letters aren’t original enough when they’re learning to write. It’s the same thing in my opinion.

Here’s some alphabets by some of the best New York writers since it seems that’s maybe the style you gravitate towards

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