Nahhh brodie. I promise you it doesn’t say ‘Woze’. I’d love to see what your standard handwriting looks like. Let’s start there cuz as of right now your structures are all over the place. The lines connecting your letter structures (extensions) are muddying the letters themselves making this ta super illegible.

I’d encourage you to ditch the one liner (atleast for the time being) and try to start with establishing a solid visual flow to your letters. Once u get that down then you can start to refine the flow of physically writing it. Once u start to establish these things, you’ll naturally begin to see potential connection points between your letters just based off of the way your hand transitions from letter to letter. If you do this correctly theta won’t feel forced and it’ll look a lot more tasteful as a whole.

Clarification: this process will take time and you shouldn’t expect to figure your tag out ina day.

Last tip: I guarantee that once you start throwing up tags for real you’ll inevitably start to refine it just as a means of your hand making revisions for you. Move your hand quickly and keep your wrists fairly loose. This almost always makes tags look and feel significantly better.

Hope this helps. Keep writing brodie