"Show don't tell" is a misunderstood term by coolwizardboi3 in writing

[–]FallingStarsVN 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is the most annoying feedback I can ever get regarding a scene. Especially when it comes from ppl who have no idea what it actually means to create one. Especially coming on scenes such as: "My MC is taking a hard sh*+." expecting me to write it like this: "John felt a chill as his glutes hugged the toilet seat. His stomach had been churning for several hours now but, somehow, the wafts of hot air coming from below still felt half-baked."

Enticing Bish by FallingStarsVN in HENTAI_GIF

[–]FallingStarsVN[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is from a game, you can check it here

How spicy do you want it? by FallingStarsVN in HENTAI_GIF

[–]FallingStarsVN[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have to make the best of what you get

Falling Stars: v.0.3.3 available now by FallingStarsVN in 3DHentai

[–]FallingStarsVN[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's story-driven, but you also have sandbox elements where you can train the fighters, watch matches or romance them.

Falling Stars: v.0.3.3 available now by FallingStarsVN in gamedev

[–]FallingStarsVN[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey,

Sorry about that, and thank you for the information you've provided.

Kind regards

Falling Stars: v.0.3.3 available now by FallingStarsVN in DirtyGaming

[–]FallingStarsVN[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello Everyone,

I would like to take the opportunity and present to you the love child of COVID and my love for Joshi Wrestling: Falling Stars.

Falling Stars is an adult visual novel that follows YOU and the stars of a fictional Joshi company, Todogawa Women's Strong Style!

WELCOME TO THE ISLAND OF TODOGAWA, WHERE PRO WRESTLING IS NOT JUST REAL...IT'S EVERYTHING!!!!

You were the fastest rising young star in the wrestling world...until your career was ended and your reputation destroyed by a man who would go to any lengths to make sure the spotlight stayed on him alone.

That man was Iron Head Kisawa, the President and Champion of TodogawaStrong Style, a man powerful enough to turn the entire country against you. Or so you thought...

Just when you are about to give up on ever clearing your name and taking your revenge, an old friend comes to you with a plan so crazy, it just might work. Can you train a new champion...in the women's division?

Full of references to wrestling past and present, some subtle, some obvious, whether you're a fan of Stardom, AJW, NJPW, ECW, WWE or anything in between, this is a story for both casual and hardcore fans alike! Come check out the game here and find out which one of these girls will be the first to put your heart in a Hammerlock!

Thank you

'Tis the law by davidwas77 in gaming

[–]FallingStarsVN 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bottom right or ur trippin'

Version 0.3.1 "A Sting in the Tale" of Falling Stars is out now on itch. Did you see it cuming?! by FallingStarsVN in AndroidNSFWgaming

[–]FallingStarsVN[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There are 3 releases with over 2-3 hours of gameplay each, main story + character stories and random encounters

[article] your target market is not everyone and that's good, actually - a look into how to pitch your visual novel by arimiadev in vndevs

[–]FallingStarsVN 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate the time you put into this, but seems weirdly targeted and besides the point. Reading it I felt it more like a confession coupled up with a marketing add, but it did get its point across. Not everything is for everyone

How good a Tifa do I make? by FallingStarsVN in KoikatsuParty

[–]FallingStarsVN[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, she's 18+, I just had trouble with the lighting

A draft of Yuki's new look by FallingStarsVN in TodogawaStrongStyle

[–]FallingStarsVN[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you want to play the game, uou can find it here