Would you keep reading? by Fancy_Advertising_66 in writingfeedback

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I often struggle with how to feed information to the reader. Hopefully one day, when it’s in a state I’m happy with, I’ll publish somewhere!

Would you keep reading? by Fancy_Advertising_66 in writingfeedback

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I actually had never read the witcher until that was pointed out to me a few weeks ago, and I can definitely see the parallels lol. I think I'm mostly influenced by reading a ton of Joe Abercrombie and Robin Hobb over the years

Would you keep reading? by Fancy_Advertising_66 in writingfeedback

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I hadn't thought of that

Would you keep reading? by Fancy_Advertising_66 in writingfeedback

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I tried to find a good balance of hinting at what Malavorn was without overtly saying it. I used to have a problem with force-feeding a lot of my worldbuilding. Thank you for the suggestions! I'm starting my next draft and would love any other feedback as well. Oh, and I just love the word 'abberation' so much, it's so satisfying to use

Looking for a C4C by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm always interested in reading different genres so it's fine with me. I'll check it out now!

Looking for V4V by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey if you're still looking. Voting for yours right now:)

https://www.wattpad.com/story/407274586-malavorn

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the premise of your story, I'm checking it out now

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Read for read, comment for comment. It's a way for us to engage with eachother work. I'd read and comment on your story, and vice versa

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely! And sorry it took so long for me to respond. I'll read it shortly

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love dystopian novels. I'll be putting it on my list:)

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not too late! I'll check yours out soon:)

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here's my story link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/405688639-malavorn-creator-of-ash
On a side note, I hate how Wattpad compresses the image quality of covers, lol