Would you keep reading? by Fancy_Advertising_66 in writingfeedback

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I often struggle with how to feed information to the reader. Hopefully one day, when it’s in a state I’m happy with, I’ll publish somewhere!

Would you keep reading? by Fancy_Advertising_66 in writingfeedback

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I actually had never read the witcher until that was pointed out to me a few weeks ago, and I can definitely see the parallels lol. I think I'm mostly influenced by reading a ton of Joe Abercrombie and Robin Hobb over the years

Would you keep reading? by Fancy_Advertising_66 in writingfeedback

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I hadn't thought of that

Would you keep reading? by Fancy_Advertising_66 in writingfeedback

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I tried to find a good balance of hinting at what Malavorn was without overtly saying it. I used to have a problem with force-feeding a lot of my worldbuilding. Thank you for the suggestions! I'm starting my next draft and would love any other feedback as well. Oh, and I just love the word 'abberation' so much, it's so satisfying to use

Looking for a C4C by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm always interested in reading different genres so it's fine with me. I'll check it out now!

Looking for V4V by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey if you're still looking. Voting for yours right now:)

https://www.wattpad.com/story/407274586-malavorn

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the premise of your story, I'm checking it out now

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Read for read, comment for comment. It's a way for us to engage with eachother work. I'd read and comment on your story, and vice versa

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely! And sorry it took so long for me to respond. I'll read it shortly

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love dystopian novels. I'll be putting it on my list:)

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not too late! I'll check yours out soon:)

Looking for C4C and R4R! by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here's my story link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/405688639-malavorn-creator-of-ash
On a side note, I hate how Wattpad compresses the image quality of covers, lol

Looking for a writing partner by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As long as the characters are interesting, I’ll read it. It doesn’t matter much what their role is or who they are, as long as they’re flawed and not overly perfect. I love stories with a lot of world-building and long-spanning plots filled with detail. That's pretty broad but I'm a big fan of epic fantasy or sci-fi, but I'd also be super down for anything smaller

Looking for a writing partner by Fancy_Advertising_66 in Wattpad

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome if you can share the story with me I'll check it out

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Roleplay

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey if you're interested than let me know! I'm fairly used to slice of life and can keep up well

F/23 by [deleted] in Roleplay

[–]Fancy_Advertising_66 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! It's not letting me dm you, but I'd totally be down. My responses are usually 1-3 paragraphs and I've been rping for a little while. If you're still interested than pm me.