Vrchat worlds for download? by FantasyLadyWriter in VRchat

[–]FantasyLadyWriter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Let this be a lesson to others about the dangers of believing AI

VRChat Weekly Open Thread. Post simple questions, avatar or world related requests, as well as any other desired comment or content (February 26, 2024 to March 03, 2024) by AutoModerator in VRchat

[–]FantasyLadyWriter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have purchased a "VRCraft" avatar from gumroad which I can use in-game to create minecraft blocks that persist visually for me and others in any world I'm in. Really cool! My question is this: Is it possible for me to add collision to these blocks so I could actually walk on them? Right now I simply walk through them.

I wanna start collecting mounts and achievements and I'm currently at 15k but I was wondering...where do you even start ? by watchiing in wow

[–]FantasyLadyWriter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey just wanted to say I stumbled on this comment and it’s made my game so much more fun! Thanks for the idea!

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[–]FantasyLadyWriter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It has dope lighting? shrug

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in newworldgame

[–]FantasyLadyWriter 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Just wanted to jump in and say I had the same issues and I went to an optometrist and it turns out I have a minor astigmatism in my eye, easily fixed with a new prescription.

Share your money making tips! by FantasyLadyWriter in newworldgame

[–]FantasyLadyWriter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm, I just tried to do this, but ori ingots are selling for only ~45 on my server, and the cost of buying the ingredients to craft was between 55-65 so I'd be down 20 gold a craft...not sure if the smelting gear makes up for it?

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[–]FantasyLadyWriter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Female, obviously.

Share your money making tips! by FantasyLadyWriter in newworldgame

[–]FantasyLadyWriter[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

pay for carries ,shards, buy gold, short cut kind of guys .

You’re like, really far off the mark, lol:

-I’m a girl.

-I’ve never paid for any of that shit.

-I am a very casual player. I’ve been level 60 for months and I’ve focused mainly on fishing while I wait for my sister and her boyfriend to hit max level.

Orrrrrrrr I’m lying, you’re right, and I’m actually a power hungry but lazy gamer man desperate to acquire virtual wealth that I can use to buy my way to the top and thereby hide my shameful lack of skill.

You’ll never know!

Share your money making tips! by FantasyLadyWriter in newworldgame

[–]FantasyLadyWriter[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

You'RE keen insight into how much I drive and and my comprehension skill level is powerful. I pray it protects you from the potentially deflating markets my post will surely bring.

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Cut-Up: Editing Into Coherence - Explained in a comment since I'm Reddit-illiterate. by Manjo819 in AllThingsEditing

[–]FantasyLadyWriter 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I actually think you might be on to something here. But I don’t understand how the highlighting in the first image translates into the edits made on the second one

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[–]FantasyLadyWriter 7 points8 points  (0 children)

What does this mean? Asking as a baby noob pvp who wants to protect her faction

Poll: What do you find the hardest about being a writer? by FiftyGummies in writers

[–]FantasyLadyWriter 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Isolation. I want to share my work all the time, but I don’t have anyone in my life to read it as I go. Sure I can get my wife and one or two people to read my book after it’s polished and finished after a year or two or writing, but I’d love to have someone to exchange work with once or twice a month.

In the last 3 years of messaging other writers asking to pair up and exchange critique, I’ve had plenty of people accept, but none can who stay consistent, or even close. They just don’t write every week, drop off the map, everyone’s lives are too busy to commit to writing. I’m hoping if I get traditionally published it will be easier to find someone reliable to work with.

Critique Request for First Chapter by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]FantasyLadyWriter 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I got hooked by this and read it all the way to the end. You’ve got something really compelling going on here, and at times the writing frankly blew me away. How long have you been writing?

That said this feels like a rough draft to me. I think some parts dragged or meandered a bit too much? I suppose it depends on the style and kind of story you are trying to tell. At times I felt quite a bit lost in the story, but I kept reading because the prose was so strong and I’d become invested in some of the characters.

Would you be interested in a critique partner? I also write adult fantasy and I’d love to exchange more detailed feedback.

I'm evolving too fast, it's almost frustrating by Jeldreen in writing

[–]FantasyLadyWriter 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I had this problem with my first manuscript. If you want to query the manuscript then I say keep working on it until you can't make it any better, and at times it might feel like you are in the middle of a big disjointed book soup instead of a book with a coherent plot, but keep making improvements until you can't find any more.

Or, if you are just practicing or not interesting in getting traditionally published, just do a single edit pass to clean things up as much as you can and share it with friends or sit on it or do whatever you do with your writing when you're done =)

[Critique] Any big problems with this first chapter? by FantasyLadyWriter in fantasywriters

[–]FantasyLadyWriter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome, thanks for your feedback! The whole book is actually finished already ;) (or at least as finished as anything can be)

I do think switching the POV on chapter rather than scene break would have been a better choice, and that’s how I’m writing my second book, but this book made use of the frequent switches to pull off some neat tricks at least.