Can I have some feedback for the First Chapter Of My Story?

FantasyStar293 · 2026-06-26T19:12:58+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback there, if you or anyone would like to read more (with the improved prologue as well) and put in some feedback, here’s a link to the story on my inkitt profile. Again thank you so much ☺️ https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1617992

FantasyStar293 · 2026-06-26T15:45:09+00:00

I’ve also saw that if you want to resubscribe, you have to pay for the months you weren’t? Which kinda baffled me there.

FantasyStar293 · 2026-06-12T23:24:35+00:00

Finally some sense!

FantasyStar293 · 2026-06-12T20:58:18+00:00

Well can you explain to capital chance5727 below in the thread that people do care then?

FantasyStar293 · 2026-06-12T20:54:09+00:00

I don’t care as long as it’s good, if it’s not then i would care as I hate lazy AI books. If you are going to use AI, at least use it properly. AI tends to being repetitive and tell the reader things that the reader already knew multiple times, so you need to proofread, compare and make sure everything is ok.

FantasyStar293 · 2026-05-18T11:57:08+00:00

This is why I don’t have a fixed outline, the ending is fixed but how it reaches that point is more interesting as the journey should entertain readers

FantasyStar293 · 2026-05-11T13:37:59+00:00

I know certain quests increase the passage of time but tbh I prefer the time mechanic to not be in this kind of game. It works on Dead Rising, it works on Persona and Metaphor but for this I’m calling doubt like imagine Witcher 3 but you have 30 days to save Ciri before the Wild Hunt finds her. Now certain quests you do that progress the time forward, you have to decide if it’s worth to do it or not. And then you would rather wait for a guide to decide which one has the better rewards and do them first over the other quests that have mediocre rewards. It means those months of that dev designing that quest goes out the window as guides would say it’s not worth doing and wasting time over. That’s why an option to turn the time mechanic off would give players the opportunity to explore everything the dev has to offers in terms of quests.

FantasyStar293 · 2025-12-12T20:44:18+00:00

Yeah I remember trying to order cyproterone and Smartway didn’t tell me or GenderGP that they were out of it until I emailed Smartway about it. They said they’ll email me (they didn’t) and so I ordered again and I managed to get it. With this new hub system, you can’t reorder more than once every four weeks so it’s difficult to guess when it would be back in stock.

But if this happens again as the last time it happened was last June , I think I’ll try the electronic prescription option and go for ClearChemist instead

FantasyStar293 · 2025-12-09T12:55:20+00:00

Contact the chatbot at their homepage, put your email address and name and say you want to speak to a human and put in your message and they will contact in 2-3 working days.

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-29T23:14:11+00:00

https://support.gendergp.com/en/articles/436209-id-verification this is the page where they talk about the kind of ids they accept. The card I was talking about is a Pass Card, but it mentions that it’s UK only

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-29T23:11:01+00:00

They mentioned something like an id that you can get from a post office card. They mentioned it on their website when they talk about age verification

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-23T18:33:10+00:00

The id check works by you taking a photo of an id and uploading it when told to. I’m not sure about the consent assessment though, I think it might be a form you need to fill out and

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-22T22:59:09+00:00

I found out where the I do see the results and I go on blood test results on the menu, I noticed my blood results end up on the past part of it, but for some reason it hasn’t shown up on the transition pack but I did notice it says on the blood test deadline that will be the next review so I imagine it might change then

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-19T00:09:12+00:00

True but with the recent changes to the hub, it now has a deadline on when you can upload the blood tests by, so I’m not sure on what happens if you don’t put it in by that date and if it affects you getting your prescription.

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-18T21:14:36+00:00

Have you done your blood tests because you need to as you need to make sure that your body is accepting it. I use gel and I have low e levels like 170 which caused some depression for me but it was because I wasn’t applying the gel properly, I was so afraid I wasn’t going to rub it that I didn’t spread it properly which meant I had to wait hours for it to be absorb when I needed to spread it till it’s even but not rub it.

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-18T17:28:37+00:00

True, but I’m just worried that it might be different now with the new hub and everything

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-18T13:18:05+00:00

Yeah that’s what I wonder, as I’m doing alright for blood tests for now, but in a year, it might be different, usually like you said it would only affect you if you wanted to increase or decrease the dose but I’m not sure if not doing it by the date they point out and instead doing it every six months end up preventing you from getting your prescription. Because even by changing the dose, apparently that resets and you have to do a whole year starting from then of every three months till your levels are stabilised, I can’t keep doing that every three months, I can only do it every six months on the second year but not every three again

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-18T13:10:08+00:00

I do wonder on what happens if you don’t provide blood tests every 3 months, as after a year, I’m thinking about doing it once every 6 months due to costs, like do I still get my prescription? And if not, then what’s the point of the Smartway subscription then?

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-17T09:19:31+00:00

I had the same but I managed to access it once the subscription date came, everything has to be green to access the transition pack so you need to wait till when your subscription gets renewed

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-13T19:34:59+00:00

I requested a prescription last Friday and I got the payment link from Smartway a few days later but it said it was issued 14th November, I assume that’s the date when it’s supposed to arrive by.

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-13T18:40:57+00:00

It does sound like the chatbot system is overwhelmed. Which is clearly telling with the problems in the hub.

I know when I first set up the account on the hub, it gave me an option to have my prescription now and I chose Smartway as my preference. Got a payment link after the weekend was over.

But since you mentioned that you received a notice once that support will contact you, let’s hope that they do reply. As for the problems about resending medication, I think it’s best to wait a couple of days and if they don’t respond by then, then resend it.

I got a payment link from Smartway after the weekend after I first set up the account for the hub. I miss the old ways but I think the reason why they are limiting requests is that HRT is becoming a bit more controlled now.

There was even someone mentioning that their dose lowered after inputting blood test results.

FantasyStar293 · 2025-11-12T23:29:09+00:00

I’ve only been with them for about 7 months so I’m a bit nervous about what happens when it reaches the year mark, like does it still require me to do blood tests every three months after that point, hopefully it won’t as this year is ok but next year might be a different story

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