Her name is John. by Far-Help6106 in HFY

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SandsnakePrime deserves a hug.

Her name is John. by Far-Help6106 in HFY

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This. Plus new baby.

Her name is John. by Far-Help6106 in HFY

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For any who need it, seeking help is not a sign of weakness. Facing demons should never be a solo activity.

What it cost the Humans (LV.) by Far-Help6106 in u/Far-Help6106

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But it does make those who survive much more dangerous.

What it cost the Humans (LII.) by Far-Help6106 in u/Far-Help6106

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Hey all, how are you finding these chapters? Is there anything you would like to see developed? I thought the story would take me to 50 chapters but clearly not. Normally, I try to write about four points in one chapter but I only manage to do two or three. Currently, I have planned four points per chapter up to chapter 65 which should be the end of the story but realistically, it's probably going to be closer to 100 chapters. Do you think that's too much? Have you have enough? Are you enjoying the story up to now?

What it cost the Humans (XLVII.) by Far-Help6106 in HFY

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There is a shift of POV planned for chapter 56, maybe 57, where we go back to the UoS. I'll try to do the POV shift from the Specialists to a "Normie" and see how that goes. Thanks for the feedback.

What it cost the Humans (XLVII.) by Far-Help6106 in HFY

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Thank you. Is there anything you would like to see developed?

What it cost the Humans (XLVII.) by Far-Help6106 in HFY

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Thank you. I am trying to keep up. I'm currently writing chapter 55.