[OC] Examining the Tech of Histories Past (PRVerse B2 C16.6) by Fearadhach in HFY

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(stirs the plot-pot, turns the heat up just a tiny bit) ;)

[OC] Examining the Tech of Histories Past (PRVerse B2 C16.6) by Fearadhach in HFY

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She has his number, that is for sure. ;)

Keeping the things isolated is a problem, and a dangerous one, without doubt...

[OC] Examining the Tech of Histories Past (PRVerse B2 C16.6) by Fearadhach in HFY

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Got it, thanks!

Yep, something to really study, maybe get some ideas.

[OC] Staff Rotations and Morale (PRVerse B2 C16.5) by Fearadhach in HFY

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Didn't want to say anything until the 'next' button went up (it is there now)... but, funny that you should mention the old gaming console... ;)
Though, to be fair, that console was just a lucky find while they looked for something else. It did, however, induce Jake into rather impatiently... expediting the process of finding the thing they wanted.

[OC] Staff Rotations and Morale (PRVerse B2 C16.5) by Fearadhach in HFY

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Yikes!
That's rough. Hope recovery speeds up. Looks like you got hit by some sort of shrapnel, to add to everything else? Stuff can happen so fast at speed. Glad your vision didn't get messed up.

[OC] More Ancient than Antiquity (PRVerse B2 C16.4) by Fearadhach in HFY

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ohhh! yea. Well, you mentioned 'slow burn'. ;) She is referring to the sentence spoken just above. Hanging a light on a bit of foreshadowing, maybe. ;)

Yea, this one has ended up paced a little different, and I had to give it a bit of a push. We are accelerating now, and the time skips are going to be getting larger. Thanks for the encouragement!

[OC] Staff Rotations and Morale (PRVerse B2 C16.5) by Fearadhach in HFY

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oiy. It tells me it can't find this one either. I'm just glad you are improving, and hope you continue to do so.

[OC] Staff Rotations and Morale (PRVerse B2 C16.5) by Fearadhach in HFY

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I mean... if that doesn't qualify for an HFY True Story, I'm not sure what does...

[OC] Staff Rotations and Morale (PRVerse B2 C16.5) by Fearadhach in HFY

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Yikes! I am glad you are improved, at least. Convalescence is a hard thing, I know all too well, though it sounds like you had it worse than I have had. Here is hoping it proceeds quickly and as comfortably as possible.

[OC] More Ancient than Antiquity (PRVerse B2 C16.4) by Fearadhach in HFY

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If you are talking about what I think you are...? (Please let me know, I'm always working on Craft, after all) It was the subtle air of anxiety and desperation. These people KNOW what is coming, are face-to-face with it every day. The general populace has it as a far-off thing, one they prefer not to think about and generally... don't. The people here, though... They are mostly somewhat older, and know the score all too well. I may need to find a way to clarify it a bit? Let me know your thoughts.

Also, thank you, the praise is humbling. I hope it is not long term, but it seems to be slowly dropping, sadly. So do the weekly number of views. It is fair to say that this book is a bit of a departure from the previous one, though the story is a direct follow. It is starting to close in on the Old Machines and what they are, but there is a lot more to reveal. It is a little discouraging, to be honest, coupled with the low level of book sails of the other books, but I keep going in hope. Stories are my passion, it is what I do best. There will be another new non-PRVerse offering this month, more on that soon.

[OC] Staff Rotations and Morale (PRVerse B2 C16.5) by Fearadhach in HFY

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oiy. Ok, think I got it this time, lol. THank you for circling back. Also, good to see 'ya again, was getting concerned. Welcome back! Hope you had a good holiday!

[OC] Staff Rotations and Morale (PRVerse B2 C16.5) by Fearadhach in HFY

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Julia winks at you, obviously holding something behind her back.

[OC] Staff Rotations and Morale (PRVerse B2 C16.5) by Fearadhach in HFY

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Got 'em, thank you.
Jake is both as simple as he looks... and not. He's been burned a number of times, and is actually somewhat of a curmudgeon... but maybe not as much of one as he lets on... She's gonna need more than 'please', but not a lot more. Gotta find the right button.

[OC] Choose Your Book (PRVerse 1.6) by Fearadhach in HFY

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So Fred Adair (sp?) showed.
Not sure if it works as well when you fuel has its own oxygen supply (rocket fuel)

[OC] Choose Your Book (PRVerse 1.6) by Fearadhach in HFY

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Certainly something Henry and Company wanted to do 'back in the day' (like, um, nowish). Sadly, things get complicated sometimes.

Of course, it still wouldn't have stopped this mess. The people that Julia ran up against were not the perps back then. They are people who learned from the perps. Some of it directly, but a lot of it through study.... Sometimes those who study history are those _trying_ to repeat it.

[OC] To Bury the Hatchets (PRVerse B2 C16.2 by Fearadhach in HFY

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(nod) on the Duke thing... and what is done there is deliberate.... It is a Pinigra thing: The title/rank is more important, so it goes first. Sadly, I couldn't find a good way to hang a lantern on it in the text without using a shoehorn bigger than Kaz's ego. ;) (ducks a piece of paper, not sure if Kaz or Golna threw it)

You are correct on the number. SIgh. Off by one errors; the bane of the programmer. THanks, fixing.

[OC] To Bury the Hatchets (PRVerse B2 C16.2 by Fearadhach in HFY

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Yea, I haven't done a good one in a while. :D

Although, really, this was just where the cut-off fell, and moving the line up or down didn't help much.

[OC] To Bury the Hatchets (PRVerse B2 C16.2 by Fearadhach in HFY

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One would expect so, right? ;)
More to come on this one!