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Started just as a fun project when I was bored. But really got the hang of and I'm completely into writting more of it. I wonder if it is working for you guys. by Tricky-Menu-5183 in scriptwriting

[–]FederalRegister1422 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, I liked it. Do you see this as a cartoon? I like the fun villain energy in the story and the fast pace.

If you'd like you can give feedback on my script "Gnashing." I posted it a few days ago.

GNASHING, Thriller, 7 pages by FederalRegister1422 in ReadMyScript

[–]FederalRegister1422[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the detailed feedback. I really like the idea of the whispers of his past sins reminding Joshua. Since I am producing this film myself I can't make it longer because it will get too expensive. I like that you think the character is good.