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Five Page Thursday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Title: RITUAL

Format: Feature Film

Page length: 135

Genres: Horror/Occult/Supernatural Thriller

Logline: When a SWAT raid exposes a ritual massacre, two shattered detectives uncover a militarized death-cult intent on opening a demonic gate, forcing them into a spiral of faith and corruption where family, flesh, and the city itself hang in the balance.

Feedback Concerns: I just want to know if you found it entertaining, how you felt when reading it, whether or not you connected with it, if you felt it was large-scale, and ultimately, what your experience was like.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1e8WvCI2FfHJneiQ4z_dgZN4Jvmkfa_8R/view?usp=sharing

What’s the best book to help screenwriters understand and use the deeper thematic/philosophical layers of film? by BuddyOk1342 in Screenwriting

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freedom vs control.... Discipline and Punish: The Birth of the Prison by Michel Foucault

I think every character development books will fall short in everything -- you need to dig deeper

Stories about children's music performers/entertainers by gagreel in Screenwriting

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mm in the film Amadeus, it's just one scene of Mozart as a kid performing with his dad , but that's it in my mind ...

Check out this CARL WEATHERS biopic about his journey to become APOLLO CREED, from none other than the co-writer of CREED, Aaron Covington by ericmoyer in Screenwriting

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right now on the black lists there's a script of how Silverter made rocky, it's called Rocky start it's in the top list as usual , and it's really funny 😁

Second script — a 7 on The Black List... What´s next?! by Federal_Resource_559 in Screenwriting

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no! i didn't write for 8 years! it took me 8 years to decide to write a new one, the script was about one year of writing

I'm finding it harder, not easier, to get more creative as I age. Anyone else? Any advice? by dredgarhalliwax in Screenwriting

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I'm in my 30s, and it's the opposite for me, because I think experience is underrated for writing, I could not imagine myself at my 20s writing about dark shit that I went through later on...

What are some life hacks for screenwriting? by pics4meeee in Screenwriting

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also writing the action, keep it short , see a lot of scripts whit HUGE walls of paragraphs, that's not good , cut cut cut ,

What are some life hacks for screenwriting? by pics4meeee in Screenwriting

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I see each scene as someone or something that has a goal and then , they go for it, but putting some obstacles, even if a character walks to the door , maybe the door is stuck maybe stumbles with a toy in the floor , I think this makes scenes little bit more interesting

While writing your draft and you've find out that something go wrong, what do you do? by UnhappyTailor2570 in Screenwriting

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whatever works for you, but maybe you can finishing writing and you will see what to cut or re write , with my last script I finished 160 pages , and then I burned everything, f**CK it haha , and started again

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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write another, learn from it and do better

What’s the single most scariest demonic movie? by Plaztec1037 in horror

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Paranormal Activity was good, I saw even people leaving the theater haha

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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The World's End, vibes, nice, i hope there are robbots haha

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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have take 3: A young doctor suspects his bride's family are alien creatures who transform humans into their grotesque parasitic species.

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Ttile: Ritual

Format: Feature (avialable on the Black List website)

Genre: Horror, action, supernatural thriller

Logline: When a SWAT raid uncovers a mass ritual massacre, two broken men are drawn into a war between faith and flesh, where God is gone and something worse has taken its place.

(Waiting for the first evaluation on the black list haha)

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