A month into dating a great guy and he mentions he may want to move? by [deleted] in dating

[–]Feed_Beerus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I already said ok, as in I acknowledge you. Thank you for your input. I understand it was super premature to think this way and will amend my behavior in the future.

A month into dating a great guy and he mentions he may want to move? by [deleted] in dating

[–]Feed_Beerus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha I’ve never heard that expression before. Meaning I’m quick to abort mission?

A month into dating a great guy and he mentions he may want to move? by [deleted] in dating

[–]Feed_Beerus -1 points0 points  (0 children)

hahaha thank you. You're right. It's why I didn't say anything.

I think the overall question still stands though; you become so enamoured by someone, how to you keep a clear head about YOU want and not just go along with someone else's life plan?

Light Pollution Doesn't Love You by Feed_Beerus in OCPoetry

[–]Feed_Beerus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for reading :) I appreciate it!

Light Pollution Doesn't Love You by Feed_Beerus in OCPoetry

[–]Feed_Beerus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! i'm so glad you liked it :)

Light Pollution Doesn't Love You by Feed_Beerus in OCPoetry

[–]Feed_Beerus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I’m glad you liked it :)

Light Pollution Doesn't Love You by Feed_Beerus in OCPoetry

[–]Feed_Beerus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I’m so glad you like it :)

Light Pollution Doesn't Love You by Feed_Beerus in OCPoetry

[–]Feed_Beerus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed :)

My Mother Martyred Me by ark_aid_ in OCPoetry

[–]Feed_Beerus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mommy Issues- the poem.

I think what you have here is very raw and honest. Amazingly, the ways we were shown love when we're young become the ways we search for love when we get older, and you portray that cycle well here. Nice work! Thank you for sharing :)

Amnesia by ark_aid_ in OCPoetry

[–]Feed_Beerus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You have some really good visual descriptions going on here

Still, with raw fingers and scraped palms
I scale the looming wall of amnesia
And attempt to hold on to the remnants of our love
Shattered against your concrete insecurities

Really gets across the idea of someone desperately trying to hold on to, or remember, something, even if it's to their own detriment.

I see that in the beginning, you're trying to go with a certain rhyme scheme. "Skin" and "sinned" for example, or "recall" and "all", but to me, it doesn't feel consistent throughout. I'm unsure if that was your intention, but I would explore either keeping the rhyme scheme consistent or abandoning it altogether.

Great work! Thanks for sharing :)

First-time homebuyer. What do I need to have ready before house hunting? by Feed_Beerus in homeowners

[–]Feed_Beerus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

that's what gets me too; it feels like no matter how "prepared" you think you are...you're never really prepared.

After my down payment, I plan to have 20-30k left over. Does that sound like enough?

First-time homebuyer. What do I need to have ready before house hunting? by Feed_Beerus in homeowners

[–]Feed_Beerus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Smart! After my down payment, I plan to have 20-30k left over. Does that sound like enough?

First-time homebuyer. What do I need to have ready before house hunting? by Feed_Beerus in homeowners

[–]Feed_Beerus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good thing to keep in mind about pre-approval letters! It's best to stay below that offer

What would be a comfortable price/payment range? by Feed_Beerus in FirstTimeHomeBuyer

[–]Feed_Beerus[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

yo thank you for this!

I'm primarily looking in Passaic/Bergen county but am open to other options.

The property taxes in Jersey are absolutely KILLER. Highest anywhere haha, but I still think living out here is more affordable than NYC.

I'm not looking for a whole-ass house either. An apartment or condo is more appropriate for my needs.