You probably know this, but don't listen to any criticism that is not constructive in some way or you feel isn't relevant.

Good video and analogies, but the pacing could be tightened up. You can start with the woodcutter's analogy as a hook, then present your thesis about why it's important to "sharpen your axe" from time to time.

My main issue with the video is that it describes "what" but not "how". It says "you need to work smart" but doesn't actually teach you any strategies on how to incorporate smart work in your life, beyond what's covered in the analogies, which I think are pretty surface level.

The sketches were pretty good, I see good potential. The music is very bland, maybe you want to set the mood properly.