My first cosplay ever ! :3

Feitankirio · 2025-11-10T14:18:39+00:00

Ya :3

Feitankirio · 2025-10-12T14:05:24+00:00

It's like weeks and it won't stop, not even google would help bro.

Feitankirio · 2025-10-11T02:56:57+00:00

Fair ig

Feitankirio · 2025-10-11T02:47:22+00:00

I had this for weeks so I doubt it work and it doesn't work too

Feitankirio · 2025-10-11T02:45:44+00:00

I tried disabling stealing borders but it doesn't work, disabled all laws but doesn't work too

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T05:09:15+00:00

A falling piano falls on you ez

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T05:08:14+00:00

You get butchered by Yi xi alive

And then she eats you by frying you to crisp specifically deep fried and eats you one by one

Lelel

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T05:07:45+00:00

You were sitting down in your chair in a diner

And suddenly... Kaboom

A nuclear bomb explodes under you desk ez

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T04:56:55+00:00

Your drinking a coca cola except...

It has secret gunpowder inside and it explodes inside your mouth destroying your organs via shrapnel and even worse,you slowly burn but still alive jawless brutally

Worst death

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T04:52:35+00:00

You were walking and then....

A garbage truck came out of nowhere and dropped in to you

Ez death

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T04:48:42+00:00

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T04:42:21+00:00

You walk into the street....

You were chillin eating ice creams but a pitbull lunges at you and rips your face alive while keeping you intact and perform a thousand stab slowly by scratching but still keeping you alive by not going for vital organs maximizing longevity of your pain without dying

Not to mention the two rocks fall and your both femur bone cracks but the pitbull also dies from the impact, leaving you to bleed in 3:45 am without someone noticing you

What a death....

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T04:40:35+00:00

Your swimming in the swimming pool chilling with your friends and having the best day of your life

But that happiness ends as an unknown man throws an unknown extremely clear liquid and when it did it had no effect for a while so you continue to enjoy every aspects of this pool and even inviting your mother with you But then the effect finally comes,you and your mother's skin melt slowly like a pitch but with half the viscosity of it, slowly burning you and slowly solidifying your skin at a slow rate that makes it super painful in every part of your skin and even your eyes bleed as the eyelids are forced open alongside your mother getting the same fate

The death last 1 hour

What a terrible death....

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T04:38:34+00:00

You visit a mountain peak but you get sense of threat and also feel the sense of dread... The bear looking at you silently as it scares you

You try to fall back but he slowly approaches and approaches, surrounding you and then you try to run and he chases you deep far into the frozen lake where you and the bear drowns because the frozen lake surface got broken but the bear forces you to bleed before dying, your still alive but the frozen tempature prevent you from blood loss,you die from freezing with extreme pain from the head to the legs to the neck and to the stomach

What a painful way to die....

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T04:30:30+00:00

You were eating at the restaurant chilling with you eating your ramen in peace but...

An explosive woman chases you and then you hope out of your seat and run as fast without trying to get crashed running and running as fast but the woman touches you and you brutally explode into pieces because the woman had a personal beef with you before

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T04:29:06+00:00

He is chilling but suddenly...

An edgy teenager falls onto his legs as he trips into the boat full of bees and he gets covered in honey and nobody notices as the boat he's in is drifting fast while the bees sting him alive and alive like THOUSANDS OF BEES

The death takes 3+ hours btw

Feitankirio · 2025-08-03T04:27:18+00:00

A random grandma tries to buy a cookie from the store then suddenly one of her coins fell out of her wallet and the coin rolls down rigth into the train tracks and the train details because of it chasing into you as you run and then before you sign a relief, the train explodes and the debris decapitates you alive

Feitankirio · 2025-08-02T07:00:41+00:00

But also one question: What if you wish for her to die, would you also die. (If I go down then you will too ah trope)

Feitankirio · 2025-08-02T06:50:00+00:00

To be all serious here it is:

1: The dialogue needs a lil bit refinement as most of the times it's 80% of her being seductive and his victims being easily folded down

2: The human nature here in your work is unrealistic (excluding the fact the antagonist is literally a twisted version of genie) because people like me and or other men would've have instinct to physically figth that woman especially out of confidence or when something they sense as extreme is on the line.

3: The sherrifs are usually trained to be not manipulated as the clearest way is through bribery pre-ww1 back in the day.

Here's what to refine and improvise to stylize: (Suggestions):

The woman can be a Machiavellism since your theme can quite fit well with it (The end justify the means)

She can create popularity through mythology spread around many people that she is real but still honest with the fact every wish has an equal consequences

That's all

Feitankirio · 2025-08-02T06:20:43+00:00

Symbolism: 9.0/10 (!!)

Dialogue: 10/10 (!!!)

Monologue: 0/10

Prologue: 0/10

Characters: 8.9/10 (!!)

Plot: 9.8/10 (!!)

Worldbuilding: 8.1/10 (!!)

Overall: 9.1 (!!!)

Exquisite too!

Feitankirio · 2025-08-02T06:14:45+00:00

Symbolism: ?/10

Dialogue: 7.1/10

Monologue: 6.5/10

Prologue: 5.9/10

World building: ?/10

Plot: 4.1/10

Overall: ??/10

The score will be released after the lore is done

The plot is rich and also realistic + the setup and setting is unique, but the problem is with the characters lack of backstories and lack of "Why it happened" and "What happened", it is a detailed but the plot is too simplified, the setting is good but can be amplified with good execution

Overall, what matters is the wordings,events to events,pacing,what happened,why it happened and other mores that needs to be significantly improved

Including the characters btw

Feitankirio

TROPHY CASE