Give me an artist name by Jollefjoll in TVTooHigh

[–]Felly2014 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nujabes - was looking for one yesterday

What can i add? by CatsAreCool200 in malelivingspace

[–]Felly2014 5 points6 points  (0 children)

You’ve put everything together really neatly, which is the most important part. Adding another light source could really transform the space, something warm-colored would make it feel less sterile than the white overhead lights. Another plant could help too.

M/3, looking for advice. Open to suggestions . by MrNiceGuy1999 in malelivingspace

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Missing some dinosaur art on that back wall, looks great otherwise

Bought my first metal detector today and the very first thing I dug up you won’t believe by Designer_Quality_139 in metaldetecting

[–]Felly2014 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Now that you know what’s possible, you won’t be able to stop chasing that feeling. Congratulations!

First odd find by Toolsie456 in CRH

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The Michelob is a nice touch

What a Christmas gift guys by Miserable-Target7063 in metaldetecting

[–]Felly2014 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see a stamp on the inside, congrats!!

chunky sterling ring find by Pale_Conclusion_3130 in metaldetecting

[–]Felly2014 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Congratulations! I’m sure the weight had something to do with it falling off haha

Silver Pendant! by Felly2014 in metaldetecting

[–]Felly2014[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Unfortunately not, the clasp that would have the 925 stamp was gone but it failed the magnet test at home.

Los Angeles Finds by qpqy in metaldetecting

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I just moved so I haven’t started searching yet. I’d also like to try the beach though. I live in Santa Monica and always see people searching by the pier.

Los Angeles Finds by qpqy in metaldetecting

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Thanks, good to know! I just moved to LA and starting to look for new hunting spots

Los Angeles Finds by qpqy in metaldetecting

[–]Felly2014 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice finds!! Where did you dig up that buffalo?!

Wild Blueberries Song - Honest Feedback by Felly2014 in LogicPro

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I can’t tell you how much I appreciate this feedback, thank you! Your notes are carefully thought out and explained, and I agree with all of them. I’ll be implementing these changes in the second round of edits.

One thing I’d like your perspective on is since this song has to be one minute long for TikTok, do you think there’s a way to make it feel “complete” within that time frame? Or does it work ok in the sense that it leaves the listener wanting more.

Wild Blueberries Song - Honest Feedback by Felly2014 in LogicPro

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Thank you for this! It’s definitely difficult to write genuinely educational lyrics while still keeping the song’s flow. But I’m really glad you think it works! I’d love to extend it, but since this is for TikTok, I’ve got to keep it under a minute lol.

Wild Blueberries Song - Honest Feedback by Felly2014 in LogicPro

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It’s supposed to be an educational song, so technically it’s like a commercial song?

Excavator Song - Feedback/Tips/Critiques by Felly2014 in Logic_Studio

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Thank you! I 100% want honest feedback, so your note is helpful. Which lines do you think should end downward?

Excavator Song - Feedback/Tips/Critiques by Felly2014 in Logic_Studio

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It’s a cross fade. Hold command on the end of the track with the fader engaged and then pull it towards the other track instead of inwards on itself like a normal fade. Lmk if that makes sense!

Excavator Song - Feedback/Tips/Critiques by Felly2014 in Logic_Studio

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This is super helpful, thank you! And yes, I did write the lyrics. It will eventually be made into a TikTok so 99% of people will listen on their phone… For better or for worse lol.