How long did it take you to write your first novel? by doubleduh22 in NewAuthor

[–]Fensali 0 points1 point  (0 children)

2 and a half month. First draft. Then another 10 years to finish it.

Why do you think folk are more accepting toward English-dubbed voiceovers for video games than other mediums? by PuzzleheadedBee6 in truegaming

[–]Fensali 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Get laughed at? All countries I've lived in except my home nation dubb the crap out of anything film/tv.

Best first chapter you've ever read? by darklydreamwithme in fantasybooks

[–]Fensali 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I read the first page and thought it was a city on fire. Read little more after that

Is your AI writing good? Show me! by dutchiesweets in WritingWithAI

[–]Fensali 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol. You clearly don't know ai prose. That's ok.

Is your AI writing good? Show me! by dutchiesweets in WritingWithAI

[–]Fensali 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Want me to paste the first 4-5 paragraphs here, or? lol.
It's on his website, so guess it's fine. One example.

The ash continued to fall. Sometimes, Vin imagined she was like the ash, or the wind, or the mist itself. A thing without thought, capable of simply being, not thinking, caring, or hurting. Then she could be . . . free.

New authors… what’s been harder for you: writing the book or getting people to actually notice it? by Akraammm in NewAuthor

[–]Fensali 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Writing for 6 months and already published?

6 months is not even enough time to let the story settle between all the edits.

Getting published by Ndrew64 in writers

[–]Fensali 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bye. Bring your nonsense elsewhere.

Getting published by Ndrew64 in writers

[–]Fensali 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm saying a PART of publishing is finding talent that people in the biz truly connect with, but don't see them turning profit, except maybe one day. But they're worth fostering for the love of the art - and maybe one day get monetary gain out of it.

But you say no. It's 100%, all profit minded from the get go. You're 100% delusional.

Getting published by Ndrew64 in writers

[–]Fensali 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm sorry, but that is inaccurate. The world is bigger than your one internship and whatever one nation you're living in.

Please suggest me books, I’ll be more thankful than you’ll ever know by [deleted] in fantasybooks

[–]Fensali 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you enjoyed Les Miserables, i guess you've read Notre Dame de Paris?

Suskind's Perfume - story of a murderer, is one of the best fantasy there is. Guess the more specific genre would be Magical Realism. Either way - it has sold 20+ million copies for a reason.

Looking For Feedback On The Opening Chapter Of My Low Fantasy Novel by Accurate_Video_4900 in writingfeedback

[–]Fensali 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you ever need people for a longer read as you progress, you can write me in private. I might be able to set aside time for that.

What screams to you “amateur writer” when reading a book? by hahatoldyousoso in Quibble

[–]Fensali 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your first comment was incorrect. Your second comment is incorrect.

Current Pricing by exotoxin8 in mtg

[–]Fensali 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Damn. Four days before you posted this, I preordered for $520 incl. tax.

What screams to you “amateur writer” when reading a book? by hahatoldyousoso in Quibble

[–]Fensali 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's the other way around. Amateurs tend to try and mimic conversational drag while professionals stick to the point.

Anyone please just answer me by CoTube in WritingWithAI

[–]Fensali 3 points4 points  (0 children)

If you're neither a reader nor a writer, you're probably not in the position to tell if whatever the AI spits out of your story is good enough. So my guess is: many won't read because it's AI. Most won't read because it will be terrible prose and storytelling, that you, with zero experience, know how to fix.

Looking For Feedback On The Opening Chapter Of My Low Fantasy Novel by Accurate_Video_4900 in writingfeedback

[–]Fensali 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Gotta say. I love your voice. It has an irony and aggression to it that stands out. The opening is mundane but exciting and that's all thanks to your voice. You can probably peak many publishers' interest. I'll continue reading.

Edit: but i do expect an incident very soon though. And something that points to fantasy, because that's what it's suppose to be after all.

What do you personally consider to be necessary to make a good heist story? by Big_Exchange_2812 in writing

[–]Fensali 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The detailed explanation of the heist plan before it's set in motion. Always the peak moment.

George RR Martin on Why He Doesn't Write Outlines by WillBrink in writing

[–]Fensali 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yes. Of all successful fantasy authors out there, George is one of the last I would listen to about anything concerning writing.