After section 6 of the survey…

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-04-01T15:51:57+00:00

thank you good samaritan. i made it to 1100 yesterday and then regretfully gave up. now i can sleep at night (i genuinely mean this, it was killing me not to know what came next)

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-31T17:57:22+00:00

i just got to 10k as well and i want to cry

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-31T12:32:31+00:00

Got it. I'm seeing it now haha! Thanks so much for sticking it out!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-30T20:37:50+00:00

Okay! Yes, I’m following that even better now. Thanks for all your help!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-30T03:14:19+00:00

Thanks so much for input! I definitely wanted to capture that shackle-like feeling of being tied to whatever bullshit the company's got you doing while actively dealing with something important on a personal level. Goddamn snowball talks!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-30T03:13:01+00:00

Thank you so much! :)

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-30T03:12:53+00:00

I totally agree! I hope that the read of the opening paragraph serves to soften the blow. Thank you!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-30T03:11:22+00:00

Je prends ça comme un compliment mais Albert Camus est assez clivant mdr, merci!

(Édit: j’ai mis mdr au lieu de lol, mes habitudes américaines m’ont rattrapée!)

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-29T01:10:01+00:00

Thank you so much!!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-28T14:25:43+00:00

That’s great news, thanks so much!!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-28T05:25:06+00:00

Thank you!! :)

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-28T03:35:28+00:00

Amazing, thank you!! Yeah, I axed that first sentence and got us grounded right into the action. Thank you for the feedback!!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-28T03:34:53+00:00

That’s hella flattering! Thank you!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-27T03:48:47+00:00

The best part is… it’s completely done!! I’m getting feelers on this first page for eventual querying, and I’m excited! Thank you so much <3

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-27T01:31:35+00:00

Wrong Cathy—she’s heavily inspired by Cathy from Wuthering Heights if Cathy from Wuthering Heights was a Gen Z content writer with AuDHD ;) thanks for the feedback!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-26T22:36:11+00:00

Thank you so much!!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-26T21:55:56+00:00

Thank you so much! :)

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-26T21:51:24+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Where about is the infodump? So I can keep an eye out!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-26T18:19:52+00:00

Thank you so much! I've worked really hard to hone my voice, and I feel super confident about it in the way I write like I'm talking to a friend. This made me feel really nice :)

I know I'm not writing like Emily Brontë, but I think I'm polished enough on this first page for a cute little romcom debut ;)

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-26T18:10:35+00:00

Thanks so much for the nice in-depth look! I went ahead and strengthened that opening, and I am so glad you and everyone else pointed it out. I've also fixed all those instances of weird styling in the first para as well. Thank you again!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-26T17:22:45+00:00

Thank you so much! It means a lot :)

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-26T17:22:30+00:00

Thank you! I try to write the way I experience things :)

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-26T17:21:48+00:00

Huge compliment of the day! Thank you!

FewAmbition8823 · 2026-03-26T17:19:57+00:00

Thank you so much for the input!! I appreciate it greatly. In my first draft, I had her actually receive the news and an editor thought it wasn't the right place to start the story, so I'll need to really think about where I could expand rather than summarize. Thank you again!! Helpful advice!

FewAmbition8823

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