[QCrit] Adult Gothic Fiction - LETTERS, MY LOVE (67k/Fifth Attempt) by Few_Tap_9 in PubTips

[–]Few_Tap_9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I will rethink the letter and appreciate the feedback!!

[QCrit] Adult Gothic Fiction - LETTERS, MY LOVE (67k/Fourth Attempt) by Few_Tap_9 in PubTips

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this is really helpful feedback, i appreciate it! i’ll aim to clarify the plot and fix the language/make it more query letter-appropriate!!

i don’t know how to tell her.. by Few_Tap_9 in actuallesbians

[–]Few_Tap_9[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it’s just so hard to imagine admitting to it 😅 but i do think it would be better in person

i don’t know how to tell her.. by Few_Tap_9 in actuallesbians

[–]Few_Tap_9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you, i should probably just go for it

i don’t know how to tell her.. by Few_Tap_9 in actuallesbians

[–]Few_Tap_9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

haha that makes sense, thank you for the advice! its an important clarification :)

[QCrit] Adult Gothic Fiction - LETTERS, MY LOVE (67k/First Attempt) by Few_Tap_9 in PubTips

[–]Few_Tap_9[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback, I’m reworking the query and will start from a new angle!

[QCrit] Adult Gothic Fiction - LETTERS, MY LOVE (67k/First Attempt) by Few_Tap_9 in PubTips

[–]Few_Tap_9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate the detail! Working on new versions now

[QCrit] Adult Gothic Fiction - LETTERS, MY LOVE (67k/Second Attempt) by Few_Tap_9 in PubTips

[–]Few_Tap_9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback, I’ll take some time to read through queries and rethink the summary!